by sethp
I am... Guilty. I need a Jessica in my life. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Jessica is starting her journey into sluthood and will love every inch of the trip. I'm sure she will soon be looking for extra instruction time.
Im impressed - you left the wham bam thank you mam group and enetered for the more designated writers !
no matter awaht the rest said - I loved it; but your not getting full points, they were right on one thing though... to little nasty sex... I know you can do more than that :-)
Im impressed - you left the wham bam thank you mam group and enetered for the more designated writers !
no matter awaht the rest said - I loved it; but your not getting full points, they were right on one thing though... to little nasty sex... I know you can do more than that :-)
get a baseball bat to the gonads! Or the knee cap, that SOB. Glad to see you back publishing stories Sethie -- good job! A very nice tribute to Busty Jessica too :)
have to agree -- the sex was trivial, inconsequential, similar to watching strangers on youporn. The most emotion shown through out was when Jessica got distraught over her b/f fucking another girl. Even that was pretty minimal.
I think guys would like this story more than women (sorry to be sexist, but most women like a little more depth to their erotica). However, I appreciate the fact that your writing was readable, and not jibber jabber.
there is no erotic in it. it should be something special and not like eating a sandwich. so make a better effort please. this is just a meat market, like those cheap pornflics.
A master has returned thank you for another great story