by natapink
Okay, this would qualify as a first chapter if it is at least a novella.
Well-written, so I'll go along. Nice pacing.
Please don't make this a two or three parter or I will be disappointed!
What? No bio?
This has the beginning of a potential long series. Can't wait to read what happened next, then hope the two of you live close enough to continue being straight (wink).
A good but long lead in to the story, but a lot of stuff that did not need to be there.
You were spot on with the 'fancy a drink' over 'grab a beer' reference. Looking forward to part 2...
Great 1st chapter. I love the start and am looking forward to future chapters.
This is not an HBO show, don't stop in the middle of the action. People may loose the interest on your story, specially if they don't know when the "next episode" will see the light here.
I'm not gay.
*making out with a guy*
I'm Not gay.
*sucking his dick*
Not gay.
*getting fucked up the ass*
NOT GAY!
I too felt that guilt afte the first time and ran. But less than a week later I was back at the guy's apartment, super horny, ready for more. And I felt guilty after that, too. But it added to it
I have never done anything with a man But fantasized about it! I would love to meet someone like that! So I could suck his Dick and swallow his cum! and let him fuck me with his Big Dick and cum in my ass, and keep seeing eachother secretly a clean Married Man, or clean single HORNY MAN.
Nice start to the story. I had the same feelings and thoughts as I followed another man to his hotel room, knowing I was going to have sex with him.