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So..l.this story is that good, hmm. I'll go to the Forbidden Planet and take Dot Matrix with me to cook and clean. And see if I can write a better space satire. What is wrong with this story? Ratings based on aons of revenge. Tsk, tsk. Think I'll go find Pizza The Hut and take the Koors Light ship.