All Comments on 'Butch'

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FitGuy47FitGuy47over 3 years ago

Great set up for (hopefully) another well written series. Lots of possibilities. Would love to see how each of his sons were converted and then what all 3 do together. Yes, lots of possibilities.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Doesn’t make sense

This story does not make any sense to me and seems like a very unrealistic stretch in feasibility. What could ever explain why the dad and both sons would come under the sexual spells of Butch and Zak? Butch was described as very unattractive (both physical and personality) and there had never been any attraction between the two men for decades. Then despite seeing his beloved son being humiliated and defiled on film and in person, he was aroused (what?). And why would Max submit to Zak after what he had done to Jessie? And why would Jessie be involved in this debauchery? If the answer is Butch and Zak had big dicks, that is ridiculous! This just seems way beyond the realm of believability.

banbrnutbanbrnutover 3 years ago

Interesting story. Almost too much intro and back story. I agree with those that said we need to know how the deed was accomplished and of course we want to know what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not a fan of rape.

I think the backstory was necessary for understanding (1) that Butch wants to ruin the protagonist’s life (2) why Butch wants to ruin the protagonist’s life and (3) that Butch is a degenerate sleaze that blames the protagonist for his miserable life.

It’s not sexy or even hot to read a story about so much hate. Especially not today.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Obviously the drinks had G in them !! The dirtier the better :)

Xmale06Xmale06over 3 years ago

So now what's gonna happen? How deeply will they all get defiled and, most of all, how will the sons react to see their father's degradation?

Such a nasty plot, thus so exciting and interesting....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Hope you continue this story cant wait to see what happens next.

LASFSEALASFSEAabout 3 years ago

Wild. Max was already into it. Was Mike? Is dad the last to be drawn in? Now the 3 can have some fun and perhaps explore more with Zak. Butch may get it in the end. Many scenarios. I hope this continues

69stroker6969stroker69about 3 years ago

Loved the story. Can't wait for more please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Lots more to happen to these characters! Please continue soon. As was said- many scenarios!

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