All Comments on 'Butterfly'

I loved this! It was soft, and warm, and cute. I loved your descriptions of the build-up into sex — they were really hot! I think the only thing that took me even slightly out of it was the 'I want to have your child'? Wanting to go bareback is a totally normal desire a lot of women have; heck, my girlfriend wanted to as well for his first. Maybe mentioning a morning-after pill is more a more realistic statement, though? Great stuff, man :)

Really nice first effort, thanks!

Great debut story - a mix of first tie and romance.

Looking forward to your next submission

I really liked the story. The "crush from afar" evolving into love and LUST up close, was a nice way to get to the conclusion.