All Comments on 'By choice or by force Ch. 05'

I have read what you have written about the Shades of Grey stories and I could not agree more. But I also think that what you have said about the female protagonist of that story applies to Laurie. I get that she is the kid of the family, but she really needs to grow up.

I can't wait to see how this all plays out!

I really like this virus angle you've introduced here. So many writers have been influenced by the COVID pandemic and this is a new and creative use for that. I'm impressed. It adds some serious dramatic tension to the story if these three women are the only ones whose blood can cure the disease.