All Comments on 'By Cracky I Think I've Got It'

This is a great story, first off. Love the descriptiveness, and it feels real. But I have to say this: when you said her legs reached all the way to the floor I just went "No shit!".

For me, this was ruined by the last three paragraphs. Sure, happens every day, nothing to note about.

Also, who are Suz and the others? This doesn't fit in without explanation.