All Comments on 'By the Light of the Fire'

Short, yet sensual and exciting. You painted a "picture with words", that conveyed tenderness, empathy and sexuality. Both characters were described in detail, as were their emotional state. This story had all the beauty of a May/Dec meeting and was one of the best I've read here.

Bravo!

I think anonymous said it very well. It was a well written story. Please keep writing.

i had a neighbor when i was growing up i wish i had this freeness with.

Awesome story, cant wait to read more thanks.

dan from texas

That was incredible. Thank you so much.

We loved it. Thanks for another great story in a long line.