All Comments on 'By the Pool with Aunt Barbara'

I can't describe what I feel this story is missing.

Great overall, but it doesn't have the feeling of being totally complete.

Sorry, just can't put it in words.

This story doesn't flow and the dialogue is awkward.

Not one of your best - by a long shot.

Idk what in the world these other readers are talking about; I think they may have just wanted more sex. But the articulation of the subtleties between the aunt and nephew were sexy and very well crafted and rounded out in my opinion. Great story mate. Genuinely enjoyed it.

What the crap...it was a fun, no, it was an erotic kinky fucking story. Got a 5 out of me and that is rare! You did good! Do some more!!

A disconnect at the last asterisk. Too much angst. Decent story.

You must add to this story, make it hotter, perhaps involving Adam's mum unless aunt Barbara has a daughter or two.

loved it .it reminds me of me and my aunt .we started after a family party and 8 years later we are still happy together

great story