All Comments on 'Bye Bye Miss American Pie'

Horrible writing with punctuation errors, poor use of paragraphs, etc.

I’m glad to see you’ve improved over the years.

It is all about dat azzzz man!!!

and 'erotic' spanking story. Impressed with your male characterization. Really, a guy I'd like to know. The bartender was well done also. Thanks -- five stars for you -- Take care

Welcome to the club. My story isn't the same as yours but it seems that has ended much the same. I started spanking my partners from the time I was in my early 20's and it only seemed natural to find a woman that enjoyeed feeling pain and pleasure...and sus sexual joy and bliss thru spanking. Lastly when I married it was esentual that my wife enjoys the feel of my hand, paddles, floggers and many other tools/toys.

Beautiful Writing...I would love to see what you do with some more drawn-out sex scenes

Loved the discriptiveness.