All Comments on 'A Battle of Time'

Another part please

Three things!

1) This was great, please do write more!

2) The point of view changes were weird, I found that a bit strange.

3) This story seems totally influenced by the Wandering Inn? Am I right? Freaking great series!

No another part lol.

Yeah I tried some early stuff with perspective changes and it just didn't quite click in this story. I write pretty frequently and it takes a long time for my stories to be uploaded, so lit is always going to have my older stuff first before anything new.

And I truthfully don't know. I read the wandering inn up to the end of the runner arc, very early on, but I have no idea if I pulled anything from it for this story. Nothing consciously at least.

"He pulls off her breasts and leaves them hanging in the air, ogling her impressive bare mammaries" - was an unfortunately strong typo that broke both the immersion and any desire to keep reading.

Great story, one of my favorites. Lots of potential for a sequel or series, would love to see more.