All Comments on 'C.A.R.P. Ch. 03'

Yeah I could see how the FBI in hte late 90s would be spying on this.

Another brilliant instalment.

Ursula LeGuin. Short story. "Those who walk away from Omelas." I think some of those philosopher-kings you're breeding should read it.

Much, MUCH too much Heinlein but very nicely done indeed.

You set mysteries up so well. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

Enjoying this very much thanks

Great story, looking forward to a lot more chapters!

I was thinking about that FBI person, and wondering why not answer "come back when you have a warrant".

When is the next chapter coming out??

I really wish I had the money for Patreon, because this and all your series here are so great that I wish I had access to read all the chapters and didn’t have to wait 6 months for the free chapters to release here. The worse part is after the wait period, I’ll still miss out on the few chapters that can’t get released here because of their pay bracket.

Just started this series a couple hours ago and I'm already eager for more chapters. Please post more as soon as possible.

Thank you

Please continue writing. I'm very interested in where this goes. It's an interesting idea, a little Harrad Experiment in it.

I got more from the conversation with Agent Costello than the last two chapters. There has to be more interaction that will flesh out the characters and the situation. Both positive and conflicting moments between Josh and the women would have been nice. How bad moments ended in a love fest and good ones became fights. And there had to be moments on campus and in classrooms.

But, I like that it is more story than sex. I would enjoy more vicariously 'growing up' with these very young adults.

Please more

Effing FBI...bunch of "nosy Parkers', as the Brits say...wanna know about stuff that is totally OUTSIDE OF THEIR PURVIEW!!!!! This is NOT 'national security' stuff...just an overactive interest in other people's business!!!!!

Sex here was so-so...demands more (Remember: "Group Sex" grouping for this!!). But it HAS been HOT so far, too!!!!

Ready for next chapters!!! Five ✨✨✨✨✨ Stars!!

Next chapter?

Is this story gong to continue??

CARP 4 will be released publicly on 10/21/23.

I really got into this story. Hopefully C.A.R.P. series will continue. Fingers crossed 🤞🤞

This is another story line I'd like to see you invest time in. A good story doesn't require a lot of graphic sex to sustain itself. You seem to be able to do both. Glad to read more as it comes available.

I love some of your other series more. Quaranteam and Font of Fertility definitely. But this one has merit as well. Good character development as usual. And a very interesting premise. Keep up the good work. And thank you for giving us another great story. And FYI I believe the agent is part of the school. Maybe even the money behind it. It seems like more of a long term social experiment than a criminal enterprise.

He should be asking what the fibbers want so he can look for the info not just walking around in a blind stupor hoping to bump into it.

A lot of foreshadowing going on. Very intriguing. I'm in for the Long haul. Damn it.

Well-written with a nice balance of foreshadowing and mystery. I'm a little disappointed at how casually he accepted the FIBee's statement that the NDA doesn't apply to her - an intelligent alpha would have checked that out. A REALLY intelligent alpha would have notified Dr. I of the contact. Still, I'm in here for the full ride. 5 star material! Nice combo of Heinlein and Robert Rimmer influences.