All Comments on 'C.A.R.P. Ch. 04'

wtf bodies?

I'm still wondering where you are taking this but I am enjoying it.

tjb50cal those come with the secret squirrel shit, Do not forget the FBI lady, she fits in here somewhere. That said, I am loving this tale and not so patiently waiting for the next installment. 5s for sure.

I've almost forgotten whatever is going on here, it's been so long.

I was beginning to wonder if you going to move forward with this project. I am enjoying it immensely. Keep up the good work. I am also looking forward to new installments from "Before the Storm", "A pack of My Own", and "Morgana's Gift". Your Quranteam series has taken on a life of it's own. I am reading several other author's spins on your original work. I just read the last installment of "Quaranteam, Book Two" the other day. Lots left in this story line..

What a wait but worth it and then you leave all those cliffhangers!!!

My only regret with this story is that the chapters are not as long or involved as your other stories. I always feel like with this story each installment is over too soon!

As an avid reader of all your stories, in this one you're portraying a situation that, in my opinion, is our future : polygamy.

As a polygamist myself I can well relate to several issues. It has a multitude of positives compared to monogamy (love, ticking more boxes with different people, better upbringing of children, overall more peaceful, no need for cheating) and only one possible downside: there is absolutely no room for the green monster, jealousy. Where a relationship between two people can be strenuous (usually due to miscommunication, irritation and frustration), between more people, living together, depending on each other, you'd need a lot of psychological insight to solve problems. To solve issues.

But, if paired correctly, I feel poly can be extremely rewarding.

Of course the fbi is involved. The notion of people becoming happier, must be a danger to governments. Less need for weapons. Too strange considering the centuries of religious indoctrination.

I love this story. I wish there were more of it. I think that as it stands there is really good potential, but the story as it is, is kind of skeletal who is the Doctor? What is the true purpose of the school? Who is the school's benefactor? Someone wealthy? A government? What are their goals? So far it seems as though each of the students has a broken relationship at home, wha purpose does that serve? What about the FBI? Does the Dr know about their interest and Josh being a snitch? Or is that a set up for a different goal?

See what I mean. There are a lot of places where there are questions not just unanswered but ignored. It is a great story line and a very interesting read, but this is a universe that could really use some more development.

Please continue story...

Please continue this story!

The mystery deepens