by CudgelFace
It is a good story so far but it's getting irritating with how short you're making each chapter.
Cut him a brake buddy , hes doing it so we dont have to wait forever to get the next part for like a week, , so its short and that means we get sometging every day almost. But brilliant story , thanks for the continued writing.
Wait a week and read several at once. The author shouldn't have to control your impluses.
Thank you for dialing back her level of bat-shit-crazy, she is now MUCH easier to accept as a character. The POSSIBLE premise that (in a universe where genetic modification exists) HER specific feline genome has an instinctive (and potentially inevitable/insurmountable) NEED to be with HIS specific feline genome, and that she is legitimately worried about the repercussions to him if/when their superiors find out about THEM, is a fully functioning plot device. Thank you for suggesting a possible fundamental backdrop for her personality that justifies her actions in earlier chapters.
Nice work.
I though length was fine, shorter stories to allow quicker posts works for me
God I was so sad when there are only 4. These are an awesome read. Please put more. I can't wait for the next part.
CudgelFace, have you stopped writing? Its been like forever .
Love the heat and passion and one commenters genetic imperatives theory
for their attraction and ad even more back story on dead brother her possible ex-lover / heat/ Friends with benefits keep it coming make this more than what she had with brother.
I came across this little gem of a story. Good characters, well written and enough sense of fun to not be a chore to read. Great little quirks and well thought out, and a believable alternate universe with a vibrant backdrop. Would like to hear what’s going to happen next. Keep them coming (in more ways than one!!)
I just realized that it's been more than a month since last post I read this yesterday and really was hoping for more ..... I hope you didn't stop this for ever :/ it was really great
Out of all the stories on this site this is the series iv enjoyed reading, I beg of you please continue it's such an enjoyable read.
Don't make me get on my knees and beg for more....