All Comments on 'Cabin at the Lake Ch. 03'

Great lead-in for the next chapter. Kudos!

"NO" not "KNOW"!!

I'll never understand why people write in present tense. It's just dumb.

What can I say? Oops.

I've done both. I like present tense for a sense of immediacy and I think it can seem more intense. The biggest problem as LarryInSeattle knows better than most is that for a poor proof-reader such as myself, consistency is a nightmare. Like most people, I tend to default to past tense, which is a problem when I've been away from a story for a time and then return to it.

I grant you it is a bit of a fad and that bothers me. Thanks.

when is the next chapter

THAT PART AT THE END IS GOOD 🤪 I wonder how their mom is gonna handle this as well as what she's gonna do. It's weird that Donna receives extra sensory perception all from a bump on the head 🤭 Your stories are well written and keep me coming back for more.