by HectorBidon
Very enjoyable story told with enough cruise-like elements that it seemed really believable. The Garbanzo Brothers’ show was a hoot, and “Still...” was right out of a cruise show script! I thought I sensed a set-up early on, but circumstances can play strange trick, too, and sometimes in very happy ways. The end was sad though, with the reconciliation bringing hope but the end of the cruise bringing back reality and a bit of realism that I hoped would be avoided. Great job, 4.7*, rounded up to 5.
This was a fun story, well written and easy to read, with realistic likable, well-developed characters. I’m a sucker for a detailed realistic setting. You had me looking up the landmarks.
Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.
Most enjoyable story; these characters must have more in them to provide material for at least one more story
Loved it, wish theres a follow up, maybe 5 or 6 chapters. Brilliant, thankyou.
Your stories ring true. The characters are fully realized and the dialogue is natural. You quite spoil me for other authors' stories
Liked this story best of your stranger meets stranger stories this did have a rather positive ending. It seems to be the most complete end. Sorry, I like happy ending since I have been living one for the last fifty years.