All Comments on 'Cabin in the Woods'

He needs to fuck her until she begins to show him a baby bump

Agreed!!

I'm sorry, but the editing and proofreading were so bad that I gave up about 2/3 of the way through the story. Your story has potential, but in its present form it is not worth a read.

Thanks for the feedback. I don't get paid to spend time proof reading and editing stories. If you have the time, drop me a message.