All Comments on 'Caged Ch. 03'

by Daniellekitten

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mefrmefrabout 13 years ago
More Please

I think that covers it.

DoctorWolfDoctorWolfabout 13 years ago
Raw

Raw and captivating. It's painful in a way, but you're building very strong characters. I hope you continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Disquieting,

no wonder you get mixed reviews.

I just hope you won't let the cats be harmed much longer ...

bad_girl69bad_girl69about 13 years ago
you have too!

I know this... this may be hard for some to read, but I believe like the other comment said, that you are building up a great story with very strong characters. You have to continue. From all the times I have been following you and reading every story of yours, you cant quit. Thats not acceptable...thats not something you would do. Do you really think many like my story?? I get many mixed reviews, but I know who my fans are. And i wouldnt do anything to disappoint them by quitting the story. Come on hon, finish this story and make it great, like all your other stories. :) Your fans will always follow. <3 <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Waiting

I have been waiting for you to finish this story. I know its hard but please continue.

canndcanndabout 13 years ago

this story is heartbreaking but i know i want to know what happens.

Raven_FLSTCRaven_FLSTCabout 13 years ago
Glad you're continuing...

I agree this is a hard story, but I too would like to see where it leads. As always, I enjoy your writing style and easily get wrapped up in the story of your characters. I'd love to see this continue. :-)

shyintxshyintxabout 13 years ago
I agree it is heartbreaking

But I have hope it will turn out right, don't stop writing it please

bulltlrbulltlrabout 13 years ago
Yeah!

I've patiently waited for this.... Thank You for continuing it! Please, please, please finish...I just have to know the conclusion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I'm so excited that you continued this story.....

I have been patiently waiting for an update. Thank you and please keep up the good work.

5 stars *****

bearmad1963bearmad1963about 13 years ago
This is good

This story has had me crying. Someone has to help Tippin and Rhys get away from this cruelty its heart breaking. Please please write another chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Yes!

I expressed my concern over the last chapter, but had said that, knowing your previous stories, you would bring it out of the bag. I know you're going to do us proud now. Phew!

dark76dark76about 13 years ago
plzzzzzzzzz continue

please continue with this story i know it will be as good as all your others

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 13 years ago
I don't like it

but I can't stop reading. I want to know what happens and how they escape.

By the way... is it just me, or is it totally creepy that Bern keeps kissing them? Who kisses a rape victim? Who is so personal with someone they have just met? I wouldn't be so complacent if I were her.

Anyway, please do continue, even though it's dark and painful.

scotsrulescotsruleabout 13 years ago
Wow

It's such a dark story but so good. It leaves you wanting/needing to know what happens next. How do they escape? Who is the master? Is there another motive (other than the obvious) for his kidnapping the girls? Does Rhys kick ass and save her sister, while getting the man?

Please write more soon!!

ladybug71ladybug71about 13 years ago
Please.....

Please finish writing this story, it's really good so far...I am very curious as to how they escape, does Rhys get Bern, etc.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

I like your writing. I was wondering why I can't find At the Stroke of Midnight? did you take it down?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

you should definitely continue this one, i'm enjoying it so far. dark but good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I...

I don't know what to say

Wildeye760Wildeye760almost 13 years ago
Great story, please write more.

I love this story. Please continue. You have to write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
hope you are well

just wanted to drop a quick note to let you know I have read you stories for years and have always enjoyed your writing. I have read that you health has not been well and will hope that you will be ok.

Thank you again for for sharing you stories.

Blessed be

ZigPupZigPupover 12 years ago

As sad as this story is, it has so much potential. please continue!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome

Your story is hard to read because it is so moving, but it is a great story. Please continue as soon as you can. Thank you

magiczeesmagiczeesalmost 12 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE

This story is very moving, I wanted know what happened as well as errbody else. Please update it soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Please finish I want to make sure those men get what they deserve

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Please continue the story wouldn't be as amazing as it already is if you don't finish. Please what happens next?

KittybalooKittybalooover 11 years ago

Please write more. I'm intrigued & need to know what happens.

dawid1501dawid1501over 11 years ago
Darn

I don't suppose you have any children. You can't seem to finish anything.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER

When are you going to write more on this story?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Continue the story

I really started getting into the story. Please continue. It would be a shame to let the story go unfinished when it starts off as well as this one has.

sexymomma57sexymomma57about 11 years ago
damn

got caught up in this story.. and now i will never know how it finishes. would have loved to find out the sisters escaped and killed those f*ckers. totally got caught up in it! not leaving any stars since it is not nearly finished and never will..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
To the person who thought Bern was being too personal...

He was only kissing them on their hands or knuckles. He's being a gentleman, nothing more.

On another note to the author, please write more! This story is so detailed it seems as if you've already wrote the full story and just want to tease us!

kalidevakalidevaalmost 11 years ago
c'mon...

... ya know you want to give us some more story! pretty-please with whipped cream and cherries on top?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Would like to read more :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Voted

The story deserves a 5 but lack of update in years deserves no more than a three. You abandoned the story. What's the point of keeping an incomplete story posted? You have something from 2013 in your profile so it's not like you stopped. You don't need to finish this, but at least remove any incomplete work. People move on in reality. We get it.

hootrodhootrodover 9 years ago
great story

Really enjoyed this story but would like more if you can. Sorry to hear of your health problems. Gods speed in getting better (prayers for you)

mftz1mftz1over 8 years ago

Enjoying this story. Do you think you will finish it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Good series so far can't wait till the next one . Would of been good if you maybe made it a bit longer.

big65dawguwbig65dawguwabout 8 years ago
More please

A interesting story with a different slant to it . Always nice to see someone with a fresh look & it's well written . Hope you decide to continue with it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Unfinished

I started at the earliest stories and have been ready them in order as much as possible. I hope you go back and wrap up the ones you haven't finished. As good as they are, it's frustrating.

Sorry if I offend. It wouldn't matter if they weren't so good.

GryphonMeidhGryphonMeidhabout 8 years ago
Next chapter?

I really enjoyed your story. I hope you continue writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More?

This is the first series I've actually dedicated myself to following...and have grown to like as well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Pleeeease finish the story

Please I really need to know how the story ends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
sad

Its a decent story sad but not erotic

TwoGunKidtgkTwoGunKidtgkover 6 years ago
Finish it

I would love to see this story completed,

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Unfinished!

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