by Daniellekitten
Raw and captivating. It's painful in a way, but you're building very strong characters. I hope you continue.
no wonder you get mixed reviews.
I just hope you won't let the cats be harmed much longer ...
I know this... this may be hard for some to read, but I believe like the other comment said, that you are building up a great story with very strong characters. You have to continue. From all the times I have been following you and reading every story of yours, you cant quit. Thats not acceptable...thats not something you would do. Do you really think many like my story?? I get many mixed reviews, but I know who my fans are. And i wouldnt do anything to disappoint them by quitting the story. Come on hon, finish this story and make it great, like all your other stories. :) Your fans will always follow. <3 <3
I have been waiting for you to finish this story. I know its hard but please continue.
I agree this is a hard story, but I too would like to see where it leads. As always, I enjoy your writing style and easily get wrapped up in the story of your characters. I'd love to see this continue. :-)
But I have hope it will turn out right, don't stop writing it please
I've patiently waited for this.... Thank You for continuing it! Please, please, please finish...I just have to know the conclusion.
I have been patiently waiting for an update. Thank you and please keep up the good work.
5 stars *****
This story has had me crying. Someone has to help Tippin and Rhys get away from this cruelty its heart breaking. Please please write another chapter soon.
I expressed my concern over the last chapter, but had said that, knowing your previous stories, you would bring it out of the bag. I know you're going to do us proud now. Phew!
please continue with this story i know it will be as good as all your others
but I can't stop reading. I want to know what happens and how they escape.
By the way... is it just me, or is it totally creepy that Bern keeps kissing them? Who kisses a rape victim? Who is so personal with someone they have just met? I wouldn't be so complacent if I were her.
Anyway, please do continue, even though it's dark and painful.
It's such a dark story but so good. It leaves you wanting/needing to know what happens next. How do they escape? Who is the master? Is there another motive (other than the obvious) for his kidnapping the girls? Does Rhys kick ass and save her sister, while getting the man?
Please write more soon!!
Please finish writing this story, it's really good so far...I am very curious as to how they escape, does Rhys get Bern, etc.
I like your writing. I was wondering why I can't find At the Stroke of Midnight? did you take it down?
you should definitely continue this one, i'm enjoying it so far. dark but good
I love this story. Please continue. You have to write more!
just wanted to drop a quick note to let you know I have read you stories for years and have always enjoyed your writing. I have read that you health has not been well and will hope that you will be ok.
Thank you again for for sharing you stories.
Blessed be
Your story is hard to read because it is so moving, but it is a great story. Please continue as soon as you can. Thank you
This story is very moving, I wanted know what happened as well as errbody else. Please update it soon.
Please continue the story wouldn't be as amazing as it already is if you don't finish. Please what happens next?
I don't suppose you have any children. You can't seem to finish anything.
When are you going to write more on this story?
I really started getting into the story. Please continue. It would be a shame to let the story go unfinished when it starts off as well as this one has.
got caught up in this story.. and now i will never know how it finishes. would have loved to find out the sisters escaped and killed those f*ckers. totally got caught up in it! not leaving any stars since it is not nearly finished and never will..
He was only kissing them on their hands or knuckles. He's being a gentleman, nothing more.
On another note to the author, please write more! This story is so detailed it seems as if you've already wrote the full story and just want to tease us!
... ya know you want to give us some more story! pretty-please with whipped cream and cherries on top?
The story deserves a 5 but lack of update in years deserves no more than a three. You abandoned the story. What's the point of keeping an incomplete story posted? You have something from 2013 in your profile so it's not like you stopped. You don't need to finish this, but at least remove any incomplete work. People move on in reality. We get it.
Really enjoyed this story but would like more if you can. Sorry to hear of your health problems. Gods speed in getting better (prayers for you)
Good series so far can't wait till the next one . Would of been good if you maybe made it a bit longer.
A interesting story with a different slant to it . Always nice to see someone with a fresh look & it's well written . Hope you decide to continue with it
I started at the earliest stories and have been ready them in order as much as possible. I hope you go back and wrap up the ones you haven't finished. As good as they are, it's frustrating.
Sorry if I offend. It wouldn't matter if they weren't so good.
I really enjoyed your story. I hope you continue writing it.
This is the first series I've actually dedicated myself to following...and have grown to like as well.
Please I really need to know how the story ends.