by Phoenix74
What a great 1st chapter and had me hooked from the start. It got hotter and hotter. You built up the tension teasingly! Cant wait for the next chapter. I'm hooked! xxx
I just have to tell you what a wonderful story you wrote. You brought the characters to life like I've rarely seen in erotic stories. This have to be the best story I've read (besides my own..lol) in quite some time. I don't think I can give you enough praise for your talent. So let me end by saying MORE MORE MORE.
CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER 2
JESSICA
From the first lines "uttering an oath" which is an 1800's term a rigid story filled with stiff people emerged.
I checked your profile and it said you are a woman but it reads like a virgin male from 1860 wrote it.
Pity if you are guy trying to hook up with desperate lezbos on here.