All Comments on 'California Ch. 02'

still waiting for the incest

It doesn't have to include incest. This category is also "Taboo", which probably covers the idea of sleeping with your girlfriend's mom....

I think of incest. Get it? It's the taboo that goes along with incest. Girlfriends mom would better fit in mature. That said, I gave this story 3 stars and I too, am still waiting for the incest.

"..python flopped out..." Good grief, that;s so tacky; it takes away any eroticism there might have been. Disgusting language does NOT increase desire! Tasteless is the word!

Pay attention to these comments. 'python' is tacky, taboo with girlfriends mother? Yes, yet it still seems in the wrong category. I too am still waiting for the incest.

. . . please please PLEASE keep writing ! ! !

I loved the story but where's the incest?? This should have been in the Mature category.

THANK YOU for a fun read!!

1 chapter at a time doesn't work for me.