All Comments on 'California Dreamin''

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oldsage_1 over 1 year ago

A real DocWords story! Thanks for the fantasy and I wouldn't mind visiting this couple again.

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Crusader235 over 1 year ago

Excellent mature story. I'm thinking he's going to make her a Weed Modelo for their tourist dept. Hope there another chapter or two. That part of CA is still on my bucket list. At my age I better hurry. Five stars

Anonymous12 months ago

Very nice, but yoh cheated on this one fitting in pieces of the audiobook story! LOL

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