All Comments on 'California Girl'

Highly recommend this story, as well as it's prequel. Both are very well written and erotic.

Magical. Well written, nice characters, just enough tension.

Loved it!! As a California Boy, born in SoCal, raised in Bay Area NorCal, the content & exposition just makes me tingly. Now I have to see family clan in SoCal & school friends in the Bay Area. Your story makes me pine for a California visit. Haven't been back since March '19. Good enough to take a break from hot, humid New Orleans, my home now for 30+ years. Mega kudos & 5 stars.

WS

Lovely! Just enough tension to make their earth-shaking decisions feel genuine. As a long-married person, I love it when everyone has someone. Thank you.

A very enjoyable story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

sopping wet :)

1 star - no comment

Well, I have my answer to the question I posed at the end of “Marnie” — would Lauren and Marnie reconnect. I had missed this tale. Nicely done with so much character development as always. As a near hopeless romantic I enjoy follow ups — a bit more story about captivating characters like Marnie and this tale was fun to read.

Enjoyed the story. The characters and scenes were hot. I’m still debating on whether Lauren and Marnie got over each other kind of fast. It was hard to keep track of the passing of time in this story. But, I like that the loose ends were cleaned up so neatly. Thanks for the sequel!

A turbulent lovely chapter in Marnies account ..... Yes a fine romance and cute details or events

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Loved it .5*. Thanks.