All Comments on 'Call Me Jenny'

Happy,

You did a great job with this! Keep writing. I didn't realize that the girl was Asian until well into the story. It would have helped to have a few details about her earlier. I know that the "Asian thing" might be a cliche kink, but your story is so matter-of-fact that it would actually help to know a little more about her.

Simonsays13

Thanks so much for the feedback Simon. This is my first attempt in writing something other than a dissertation. In fact, I hoped it would help in pushing through my writer's block I have been struggling with the past week. Hopefully in my next attempt or shall I say my next writer's block, with guidance of readers and other well versed Literotica writers, I will be able to produce a more fulfilling story.

xx

Kitten

That's a great story!!! I would LOVE to read more!!!

Helen (Jenny) is going a long way in life. She's smart, flexible, and funny as hell.