by moreandmore
Using humor made this story. Too many stories in this category have the cheated upon going ballistic and BTB fashion. Levity in this tag is scares but a welcome change. Good story. BTRH...
I was kind of hoping Marty's wife would charge in screaming obscenities and throwing cats😉
This was a 5 Star Story for Me .. I hope everyone else enjoyed it . I work with a Lady like Lori and She is more feared then the Boss .
One hell of a great story!!! Love how the receptionist got more than even with those 2. One of the best stories I’ve read here. 5 stars but wish I could give more. — Bob
Not the best, but quite funny and very different to anything that I have read on here in the past, so I gave it 5*
A lot of writers have trouble with the closing lines of their stories. You are an expert at that.
Loved how the two treacherous snakes turned on each other when things started to go sideways. I've met all too many smug, supercilious dipshits like these two IRL so it was hilarious how they got what was coming to them!
It’s a nice fantasy, one of those I wish upon a star type of story. People like the two portrayed in the story deserve what happened, but come on…both lovers neatly stacked their clothes next to the conference room door? Secretary with ninja skills gathering cloths and phones and slips out unnoticed…surprised Santa didn’t show up to grant a wish as well.
FOMCL at parts, super wondering what would happen in other parts. That secretary that did the "damage" was great! 5 stars on this 2nd fun read. Bob
How very inventive. They were awful to her at work. She destroyed them. Very good story. BardnotBard