All Comments on 'Call Waiting On Line Screwed'

Very cute story. Well done.

LOL. That was such a cruel trick Lori played on those two cheaters. I loved it. Thanks for posting.

that was funny and good. until lori's confession she would have been fired for putting the company in jeopardy like that. on top of that now she has 2 very pissed off ppl after her. but damn that was funny as fuck. ty for the read

Very inventive definitely worth reading . It was very amusing really liked the story line and especially the ending

now that was good.

Very amusing. My smile bloomed into a full face grin by Lori's promotion. Thanks

Very nice!!

Gotta watch out for the observant girl at reception. I'm happy that the one at my company was both georgeous… and had a little crush on me, complete with birth day and Christmas cards etc. Great Job, Thank You 5*****

They both were assholes and got exactly what they needed

Where was Smithers ?!!

Go Lori!

,,,the overuse of the names from the Simpsons, this was still a laugh a minute riot.

5/5 for the Burn(s)

Truly excellent.

Good way to start the day.

I like Lori!

Short and to the point. Perfection personified. Ideal. We can all rest easy tonight as all is right with the world.

... At Springfield Corp?

In any case, definitely one of the most original retribution stories I have read here in a while. Who would have thought that third party BTB could be this fun!?

As always, thanks for the share, author.

D'oh!

You expected something different?

What a burn! I could actually feel their panic!

They both got EXACTLY what they deserved. I loved it

So many bad things all sequenced that it was really quite funny. I think Mona and Marty will be having nightmares for a long time.

I once tried my hand at writing a story where things got worse and worse, but you did it VERY much better than me. I enjoyed that a lot! Also, it was amusing to see how quickly the lovers turn on each other when things got bad.

Great little fun story, and just desserts all round. Well done and thank you😂

NEVER PISS OFF the Receptionist!

5* Awesome read.

Well done.

My wife and I have always said 1) good admins are worth their weight in gold and 2) be very nice to them because they often know as much as the boss and usually have his/her ear more than most.

Fun

Every office has one. The person that knows and sees all. Watch your back Jack!

And fun.

What, no Smithers?

Perfect Monday morning laugh. This is one great little story.

Good funny romp, just the way to start a Monday morning.

Be careful of those you stomp on, on way up. In case you meet them on the way down!!

Great!!

That lady is my hero. 🤣

LOL. 5 stars

Wow indeed. Someone has been having some disturbing dreams at night to write this story. Certainly a change of pace. Thanks for sharing. A Five...

Loved each character named from The Simpsons'

Creative, humorous and amusing.

What more could be asked of a flash story?

Well done.

Only thing missing was Mr. Burns saying "Release the hounds!"

Nice story, though the ending seemed a little rushed

Now that is what I would call a Nameless BTBs Burn. I guess there is more than one way to get top the top floor. lol

I liked the twist on the same ol' same story type.

The admins, clerical and other office staff (including the receptionists) are the people who know what's really going on in a company.

that was really enjoyable.

Nice use of the last names from The Simpsons.

Just a fun story of burning two cheaters. I could visualize the panic.

Business Administration 100

Doesn't always pay to dis the little people.

Maybe should have been in Humor, since the marriage aspect was unexplored and irrelevant. We have no idea why these dumb shits were fucking, but since its all a joke, who cares?

Thanks for your time and talent.

Wonderful. Too nonconvoluted to garner more than four stars, but a HIGH 4*

Never forget the bus-boy can sneak a ‘Kick Me’ postee on your back.

How clever. Thanks for writing it.

...very amusing short story. Loved it! 5 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

Rare and difficult to pull off here.

Loved it and you should be careful who you piss off at work

Well plotted flash story

and entertaining too.

Top ratings from me.

5*

5*

Great double burn and a good lesson about treating coworkers. You never see it coming.

HILARIOUS - MORE, MORE!!!!!

Hoo boy! What a neat prank!

LOL!

Downright funny as long as it's someone else.

No PI's, no searching computers or phones, just a quick public execution. Nice.

Nice, fun story. Straightforward and easy to follow.

Strongest compliments to the chef. Clever plot with good character development - all in a shortie. Your humor is a welcome alternative to the calculated pain typical of BTB stories in LW.

Moral of the story? Be respectful to everyone. Rated 'E' for entertaining. ******

Enjoyed

There is no business with more accounts of office sex than radio stations. Over my career I have witnessed more office sex and heard more stories than anyone could dream up. I have stepped over two DJ's having sex on the floor. They made no attempts to stop. I have been propositioned by numerous callers and female DJ's and secretaries and spouses of fellow DJ's.

It's the simple things that can really make your day, especially in times like these. When Burns tapped fingers and said "Excellent", I almost cried. Thanks for a funny, uncomplicated little piece,

WHAT A HOOT! SHORT AND SWEET!

and coin of the piper must be paid. TK U MLJ LV NV

What an enjoyable story. Had me laughing several times. Most LW stories have so-so endings BUT this ending was delicious. However, the last line of the story was the "coup de grâce'.

Thank you for such an enjoyable story.

This Story earned all 5 Stars . I guess the Cheaters found out that Payback is a Bitch

I laughed out loud more than once at this story. It’s definitely a Five Star story.

Love the devious stuff

The funny short ones are some of the best.

Keep it up!

Short, sweet, and funny. GOOD JOB! 5*

Nice one, it is great to read about getting your own back.

Chuckled again.

Gotta love Lori's payback. She worked it perfectly.

Another great little M&M special.

I just love M&M's stories. Tanglosax

Need a tag as BTB too. :D Loved it.

Excellent story.

'Call waiting on line...' I gave it a five.

Very funny. Just glad Marge wasn't involved in any of this.

Truly enjoyed it.

Cute and original. The violence seems rather strange though I guess it was to enhance the plot. I used to follow your writing, I am glad I am reintroduced to it. There are only a few authors here that are entertaining to read without frustration, you are one of them.

Great story. 5 stars. The Bear approves. Found this by accident while checking someone elses favorites. Glad i read it. Keep up the good work.

The BEAR

Great little story!

The only thing that might have improved it is including a little humor. ;-|

Hah!

Excellent

Ye reap what ye sow. I hate cheaters. Fuck 'em.

Five Stars

Superb!

The Simpsons reference takes one out of the story and makes it ridiculous. Would've been an interesting story otherwise.

Echoes of Harddsysknight. That's a major compliment.

I surrender! As comedy, that's a five. I'm still laughing. -5-

Fuck with Mona, fuck with Marty, but for god's sake don't fuck with Lori Flanders!

Thanks, love this one .......

LOL, stealing their clothes was brilliant, the rest a good laugh

Lori was the office badass. Cheaters nicely burned.

Full marks. Cleverly written, good humor and quite entertaining.

Well done.

Good one....LMOL....heck...RGLMOL...Rolling on the Ground Laughing Much out Loud! 5 Stars

This story was very funny and I absolutely loved it. Both of them got what they deserved.

Lori was fantastic. I loved that last line about her being feared. I would never want to cross her after seeing how far she can go.

5-stars.

That Sir, was the cats meow. Loved it. You are fast becoming my favorite of all time Authors with these story. Another 5 BIG FAT STARS!

5 stars - I like this story

Wow Better check Lori's pussy for shark's teeth before you start! 5