by kandykanelayne
Looking forward to see what happens next. He seems to be on top of things and surprises her in a good way.
Wow! That was quick and good I hope you write more. And could you make him gentle and handsome? That has always seemed nice to me. Write more! I like your style.
You appear to have a feel writing. But i sincerely hope that this is a start of a much longer story. It has a potential to blossom into something very good and you have many directions in which you can take it. In truth you can go light or dark , heavy or gentle , a mystery or an open book. Sincerely hoping for more, good luck!