All Comments on 'Calm Before The Storm Ch. 03'

Sex in this chapter did nothing to advance the story.

If there's no sex, I get bitter complaints. If I put in sex, there's complaints. The sex in this story was put in because it just came to me to do so, and so I wrote it in. But you guys need to figure out what the heck you want, because you can't have it both ways, it's either-or with sex scenes...

I am not sure about anon earlier or the comments on the other stories but I still love seeing when you have posted a story. To be honest I go on a search each time I get on LE to see if you have anything new. My only suggestion would be to write for you and ignore anyone asking you to change your writing. So far your judgment has given us a marvelous journey with a colorful story. Thank you very much for that!

If you feel right in yourself, about what you write then that is the best of the best.

I love your writing as it flows, making you think and getting involved within the story.

Good luck keep up the good work.

These shorter, interlude-like stories are the best place for the extended sex scenes. Not only do they not interfere with the more complex plots of the longer stories, it make more sense for them to happen when events don't require the characters to be so totally "on their game."

Out of his mouth and into his mother's mouth? A little typo.

Write your story. Sex does not have to advance the story. It can but it can also be used for character development outside of work for any/all your characters.

i'm surprised at the good ratings...found it too long, too convoluted, too many names.

english pretty good, however. thanks, but not for me.

You're going great. Love the stories in their entirety. I know I'm still catching up but just keep writing.

*****Good ending beginning. Thanks for sharing.

Would anybody point to the part where Daniel Allgood and Messalina hooked up?