by Tepin
The only way it could have been better is if it was longer.I would have loved to see the mutual scene, last paragraph, written into another page.
I loved the twist.
I wish I would write this well. Concise, always moving toward the climax. No unneeded details or diversion. But you have the luxury here to spell out people rather than abbreviate as ppl. On the one hand the word is twice as long, but you only saved 3 characters. Not familiar with MVC - motor vehicle collision?
Looking at your profile, you have a wealth of genre covered and a lot of good stuff for me to read. Time to get started!
Nothing can beat this story I needed up cumming thrice .... After reading it againnd again .... Awesome .....
This could easily be a continuation. Damn good twist for sure. Good job!
Nice plot twist and a really fun read. Looking forward to readying part 2 later today.