All Comments on 'Cam Connection'

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bshell47bshell47almost 4 years ago
AWESOME Surprise

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Very Good

The only way it could have been better is if it was longer.I would have loved to see the mutual scene, last paragraph, written into another page.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
What fun!

I loved the twist.

I wish I would write this well. Concise, always moving toward the climax. No unneeded details or diversion. But you have the luxury here to spell out people rather than abbreviate as ppl. On the one hand the word is twice as long, but you only saved 3 characters. Not familiar with MVC - motor vehicle collision?

Looking at your profile, you have a wealth of genre covered and a lot of good stuff for me to read. Time to get started!

murlimohan6969murlimohan6969almost 4 years ago
Tats so refreshing and we'll written

Nothing can beat this story I needed up cumming thrice .... After reading it againnd again .... Awesome .....

cyberokie2cyberokie2almost 4 years ago

This could easily be a continuation. Damn good twist for sure. Good job!

ExperienceCountsExperienceCountsover 1 year ago

Nice plot twist and a really fun read. Looking forward to readying part 2 later today.

joop123456joop123456over 1 year ago

heerlijk geil verhaal

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