by DirtyMindedMinx
Love the series so far, great job! Hopefully there are many more chapters to come.
I think my grip will improve from reading your stories...
This has got to be the best one so far, you got it soooo right.
Jay
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That really was AWESOME! I agree with the others...this is the best yet! Please, pleaasse write more Chapters.
Very Nice! I like how you think DirtyMindedMom. If only you were MY dirtymindedmommy... Lol
Depraved goodness. Makes me want more and more. You have a talent that is undeniable.
You have got to continue this by picking up exactly where you left off. Maybe the four of them come to some type of extended agreement that Jesse can live with, now that he has confessed to why he has had all that anger toward his mother (which was also anger at himself). Afterall, the job prospects are still going to be the same as they have been, and they are going to need to still find a way to meet their bills.
very hot got me nice and hard perhaps a nice 4 some to follow? Darlene and Cherie sucking and licking pussy???
Darlene should clean up Jessie and Cherie, after Jessie shoots his second load into Cherie, deep in Cherie's ass.
i cant wait for them to go home n fuck each other brains out. 5stars from me.
Love for the husband to fuck the son as the women watch playing with each other. Maybe the mother can suck her son as his ass is being fucked?
loved your latest addition, and can't wait to see more.
Very hot story, all four chapters! This chapter was a seriously erotic story in my humble but now addled state of mind! Love your stuff. (PJ on your site)
Absolutely wonderful story!! I loved the twists and turns and how this has gone!! You really know how to capture your readers too!! My wife and I read this story together too and we both have some wetness to deal with now too! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
I loved the way you developed this story line . . I hope to hear more in the future
This has to be the hottest, most Intriguing story in this series. I sincerely hope you write at least one more chapter. I will be anxious with anticipation.
Great story bangs the key spots.. Mom is a tramp and I love it..Eat that cunt..
I have never nor will i ever read such an intense loving sexual mother son story again... this was so perfect.. everyone should take time to read... wonderful job and leaves me wanting more
such a great series. You simply must keep writing, neighbor... ;)
If Jesse does feel about his mother the way you have portrayed him to feel then he would not be giving her a wink there at the end. Instead it would be a shake of his head and a look that says "Don't you dare fuck that asshole".
@Anonymous (2/26/15): What makes you think you know these characters better than the writter? Maybe you should wait til the WHOLE story is finished before you decide to criticise a characters actions before you have all the information to decide if it makes sense or not. And hopefully we'll get the rest of the story soon (hint, hint).....
This was really nice story,but you ruined it with this "sharing" shitt.
Sorry but only 1 Star. Previous chapters were nice,but this one is crap. Like I said if they Love each other they would never sleep with others
I only wish I would wake up as a 16 year Old and see my Naked Sexy Mom sucking my Cock and her hands feeling my hard young teenage body, then to have Sex with me, this woukd only be the first of many encounters that would continue till Mom is a Very Old Lady, and each time woukd be as Good as our First !
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That's the wish of lots and lots of sons, maybe down deep every last one of them. They want mom to treat them like her darling baby boy, stroke him lovingly all over his body, and pay special close attention to his fat young penis and heavy loaded balls. In return, mom lets her son explore her own mature voluptuous body, concentrating on her bountiful breasts, still perky ass, and especially that wonderful hairy hole between her legs, you know, the hole her kid came out of, his own mother's vagina. Then they discover that the son's penis fits up the mother's vagina real fine, they're a perfect match! Nothing says love like fucking your own mom, over and over again.
I can't thank you enough for this series of stories. Powerfully erotic and well written . Darlene is my hero , a.white trash slut goddess , but still a good mum. I beg you to continue this series . It's exceptional.
This is a rough story. The main characters are rough; however, given the chance, they turn out to be caring individuals (as expected) who love each other. The son's display of disrespect and hate for his mother was actually the hate he felt for himself because of the sexual want he had for his mother (as expected). This author is a very good writer who makes gutter language seem appropriate for the situation at hand.
Outstanding story, the writing and telling of the story was perfect. So sexy and erotic...........():\
I cant believe how hard I am wait yes I can this story is hot as fuck next part here I cccuummmm
Wow. Great story. Great writing. It's the first story I've ever read with that theme. I'm not into mom-son ideas but the story could extend into many other avenues. What if one of Jesse's friends saw her online and decided to blackmail her into sex with him.
I love the following paragraph
""Would you like to fuck Mrs. Sheppard, Jesse?" I asked, doing all I could not to let the envy leak into my tone. I wrapped my hand around his hard shaft. "Do you want to put this in Jeremy's mom?" I knew Cherie would love hearing it phrased that way. "She misses her son's cock and needs yours inside that beautiful bald cunt of hers.""
Check me out.