All Comments on 'Came Home Too Early'

you forgot child molester in your tags

This needs to be continued. That is all.

Stopped reading when I read 92 years old grandfather with his daughter. Give me a break !!!

Could of been a great read instead just made me wonder what's the point. Hopefully it's continued and it's father daughter not granddad. It was a bad move ending like that. Decent effort.

Ready for the second chapter

Seems like a cross between an incest story and a cuck-tale. Interesting.

Anyway, she asked him if "it" worked this time,

What is "it" and how is it supposed to "work"?

I'll hold off voting till somebody can enlighten me as maybe I'm just dense.

Let's see now:

The narrator was born when his mom was a freshman or sophomore in college;

"I was a 38-year-old single father about to raise a daughter on his own" and the daughter has been fucking her grandfather for 2 years, so let's say she's 20;

That means, narrator is now at least 58 - BUT his mother died in her late 50s WHICH was only two years ago.

This means narrator is basically the same age as his own mother;

THEREFORE, narrator is actually GRANDPA, who in his 50's went back in time and fucked his own mother, thus fathering himself!

This makes 'grandpa' and 'dad' the same guy! So when 'grandpa' gets Allie pregnant, the son she bears will be grandpa's grandchild, child and brother, all in one!

Maths is hard!

I actually like the older and more realistic old man in this story instead of all the hunky Brad Pitt looking old dudes. The time stamp might be off though. I think it should be Grandpa 92. Grandma gone at 58 so she would have been 60 now. Daughter is 20, his is 36 to 38.

Geez commentors... pretty obvious that she's referring to pregnancy. Beautiful story, lucky girl.

Hope they do not find out he knows!! And I hope he here's more of there everyday conversations by filming and taping!!

Will he be raising a combination half sister granddaughter or half brother grandson?

She will be giving birth to an aunt or uncle.

What a hot mess.

The author clearly states that his daughter had just had her 18th birthday. So, according to her comment to her grandfather, they have been having sex since she was 16... Pretty sure that is against the site guidelines.

Loved it. Have a thing for grandfather/granddaughter incest, but for some reason, this caught me by surprise.

He should cut his bols off and Barry his ass in the basement and let the bitch watch.

Does the father get aroused and wishes to fuck her lovely daughter ? Will there be a part two ?

I enjoyed this. I was sad when I finished it. But, I wouldn’t change a thing. You’re descriptions/wording were great too! Not overly cheesy. The momentum was perfect! No need to make a long ass story. It was hot! Sexy! And ready for a part two and maybe three!

I’m jealous for the dad and I’m just reading this.

Could you be a real ass and leave a note on the daughters bed “JEALOUS” and then see if the daughter talks to you? If she didn’t you could just start procedures to put grandpa in a home.

You could set up a plan for grandpa to as bad as it sounds, and it’s bad, to have his ‘turn’ first till he is nonfunctional and then the dad takes over and the daughter and dad raise all the kids themselves as one family....

It all comes back to the response the the “JEALOUS” note...

Oh good story and 5 stars even if I had to read the complicatedly written genealogy at the start. All you had to do was mention that the DAD and not the MOTHER was raising the daughter. Without this information your left hanging for the key piece of info for the first paragraphs to make sense. Then you go, oh daughter of dad who is living and mother who died of infection in childbirth, granddaughter of old dude who married a younger girl but she died first.

Get them out of your life!

I'll be 90 in a few months and I would enjoy a sex session like that. My lady friend is 91 now and has given me a few blow jobs when we first met. That was a couple of years back, and now her 70 year old daughter has shown me her ass and close to her p**** a few times when she comes over. I'm just a horny old man and have enjoyed all of my sexual experiences with a lot of pussies.

it need a part were the dad gest her to

Need a part 2!!!!!

We need part two where gramps gets her pregnant

Post a second part!!!!

The fact he didn't get passed and throw grandpa's ass out shows he's a cuckold

disgusting

I don't really see a problem I liked it.

I am only 70. But I am fucking one of my twenty year old granddaughters.

Trash with no build up and any dad who loves his daughter would have flipped shit over that enough he would have kicked them both out of the house and would have had nothing to with the dad anymore and would have had a cold relationship with his daughter if any

Yech. A 92 year old sack of wrinkles fucking dads daughter with the implied intent of getting her pregnant? Only someone with a severely warped sexual orientation would find this sort of crap arousing . . . .

As if man is his 90s not going to happen most men can't even get up anymore past their mid 50s very few into their 60s no 1 in their 90s as far as getting someone pregnant at that age definitely is going happen this wasn't even a likable fiction story and the way it was hinted that it started when she first turned 18 about when she started disrespecting her father so it's hinted that her grandfather basically said it's OK to for her to disrespect her dad