by cbsummers
What a good ride through this story. Their visit to Rona's home was a surprise twist. Even though she wants out of her family situation and would really like the big bucks of porn, Louis's photography skills could launch her into a modeling career. She could still make the big bucks and so could Louis as an expert photographer. There are multiple paths this story could take. Thanks for taking the time to write. I certainly enjoyed this story.
Is there a latent fantasy involving the legendary gossip columnist involved here somewhere? Fun story, thanks!
Tell me there is a part 3? Stories like this need a definitive closing...
This may sound strange, but there's a certain innocence to this story -- even through all the hot sex. Hope it doesn't end badly for him.
I’m just a regular guy - I hardly ever make comments. But you’re two stories of Rona were so natural and real. I hate porn but I loved you version of it. It should be a movies. You’re a great writer. Are you male or female??
I don't know what thrilled me most, that she thought I had a big dick, or that she knew what an ICBM was!
Great story! I just found your collection yesterday and have really enjoyed each story I've read so far! Gave each a 4 or 5 star rating. Looking forward to reading more of ur stories soon.
I suppose you aren't writing now, at least not for the Literotica site, but I want to say Thank You for writing great stories for us to enjoy!
Good work Sir. The nonstandard character traits of the "nerd" and "popular girl" both avoid predictability and provide many different paths for the story to take. Technique allows unexpected events & great endings. 5 stars... Please keep it up!
Great story with a plot line that keeps you guessing. Well written and hot. Good work!
A porn star is born! I guess after 11 years there's little hope for any more chapters, so sad as the story had great potential. Another very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
You should've written more sequels to this. Characters are so well written and explored.