All Comments on 'Camp Counselor Nights'

This story is very well-written and well constructed, with a good introduction and build-up, a good plot, and good characterizations. The romance in the story is done very tastefully, never becomes repetitious, and is just the right length in the overall story. The story also has an interesting setting, and it certainly needs to be continued. One is left wondering just where this relationship with Chelsea is going to go- into a full blown romance, or are they going to drift apart to meet others? Further, it would be interesting to know just what sort of camp this is- a school camp, church camp, etc. (If a church camp, it would make for a very interesting story should the author choose to go in that direction). In any case, this story needs to be continued. Five stars

Prince, enjoyed your story but, let me make a suggestion that should make your work even better. Keep your paragraphs much much shorter. Very long paragraphs are difficult to read and maintain your place of where you are. I would suggest that you limit them to less than six lines. I have seen some stories where the paragraphs are less than three lines. It should make writing your stories much easier. Don’t work harder - work smarter.

This story really demands a follow up story to show what happened to them. MM