All Comments on 'Camp Counselors Ch. 04: Heading Home'

The only thing disappointing about this story is that it is apparently finished with this chapter. Wonderfully drawn out distinct characters make the story line that much better, and the love scenes are very well done. Five stars.

Would love to read some of Bob's exploits. This was a great series.

Just finished a marathon of your stories - I gave all of them 5 stars - love the story lines, the writing and all that goes with it.

Cant believe you have such high scores with so few comments - thanks for the entertainment.

Thank you, my Anonymous friend!

I really enjoyed this serie. Thank you.

Fun, but not quite as good as Alistair's or Scott's adventures. Once again, beware of auto-correct on your word processor, and please edit your work. It'll make old editors like me happier.

I've really enjoyed reading your stories, but one note of criticism. While "prick", "dick" and "cock" are pretty well accepted terms for a man's equipment, "vag" seems a bit harsh and crude as a description for a lady's treasures. Maybe I'm just showing my age, but "pussy", "quim" and "twat" are more satisfying terms of her endearment.

Again another gem of a series. I also don't understand why you don't get as many comments as other authors. You deserve many comments and more than 5 stars. BardnotBard.

5 stars Amazing story love all your works! Keep writing!

I would have liked it if Bob got stood up because Elaine was thinking about Casper.