All Comments on 'Campground Discoveries Pt. 06'

by dondave

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DevonCowboyDevonCowboyabout 2 years ago

Fantastic series about sexual awakening and really appreciate it being told in the first person by Gil. It felt like Gil's mind was mine. I laughed at the comment from his father to not let your dick rule your brain. My dick has ruled my mind since I was 11 or 12. Barely a moment passes that hasn't been interrupted by a sexy thought, especially if I'm working alone out in the fields. I usually have to have at least one wank just to bring my concentration back on my job. I also loved the outdoor setting. Alfresco fucking is such a turn on. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Beautiful. Gil is ready for a lifetime of pleasure with men, and if he desires, with women too. His feelings for a man should deepen when he and Danny fuck each other. I have thoroughly enjoyed your convincing rendering of a man’s natural awakening to his love of men. Very much a turn on to me throughout.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

OMG, you told this story with the tenderness that it deserves. And you could not have ended it any better than you did. This last chapter stirred up so many memories. I lost my virginity in almost the same way. My first time was outside and also with someone I barely knew. Like Gil, I didn't feel any pain either, only a kind of euphoric floating sensation. And I'm sad to say I never had an orgasm quite as intense again. I suppose first times are just special that way. While I'm sorry to see this story end, we can always hope for a sequel. After all, there is a reunion with his friend Danny and college coming up. So???????? Great job on this one. Thanks, MLF

dnsontndnsontnabout 2 years ago

“… straight with a gay chaser." Brilliant writing. Last day at the campground. Hate to see it end.

Riki1942Riki1942almost 2 years ago

What a wonderful story! I usually like them shorter and to the point, but this one had my full attention and looking foreword with anticipation of what might happen next. Very well written!

Like your story, my first time wasn't painful, but his cock was fairly thin and I had already been fingering and slipping things in myself.

Unlike your story, I had always known what I wanted and was just waiting for the chance to find another young friend that I might somehow steer the conversation in that direction without letting on what my feeling were in case he had a problem with it.

Like your story, I had seen guys in the shower at school, but I was usually almost late for my next class because I usually tried to be last in the showers because I was afraid that those naked guys would make me get hard.

When I did find that first friend, it was the first time that I had ever seen a guys naked hard cock, we did it all and he came inside me bareback. I was hooked for life!

I hope you add another chapter and he can share what he learned with his friend and take their relationship to the next level.

lingerielover68lingerielover68almost 2 years ago

What a wonderful series! I agree with everything said by the other comments. What a great writer! Big fan!!

PabloPaco2022PabloPaco2022over 1 year ago

dondave is a master of his craft. He handled the subject matter of a young man experimenting and finding his sexuality so beautifully. iIt was erotic and sensual at the same time. He treated sex with the beauty it deserves. It was an immense pleasure to read how he introduced the gay and bi-sexual aspects of sex whilst maintaining a positive attitude toward straight sex as well. He normalised all three which is exactly what is what the entire world should do. He made it very clear to me that us bi-sexual guys possibl;y have the best sex lives. Wonder if, as far as they are concerned, the bi women would agree.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I want another story about him meeting with his friend, Danny, and them experimenting further. Than maybe them bringing in some of their friends.

coc121coc1213 months ago

would love a follow up of this story

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