- Loving Wives
- Camping
- Comments
All Comments on 'Camping'
by romancer
- 18 Comments
impo_60about 9 years agoA good story, just with a small but...After she had cheated in the shower some hours earlier, she says to her husband: "Tom, we've talked about this sort of thing. Are you still ok with this?"...This question should have been put before she cheated...And if the other man was divorced because his wife cheated on him, I don't think he would do it to another man, even if she said it was all right...3*
Anonymousabout 9 years agosince it went back and forth between Jim and Tom...does that make it a 4sum???
Anonymousabout 9 years agoI ran into a situation like this at a campground in Sturgis S.Dakota 2 years ago, happened almost the same way you detail, great writing and truly an interesting story, my story ended 2 yrs ago but I hope you continue with this one !!
cody
rightbankabout 9 years agoeveryone here is happy, no one was coerced, no one was sneaking around deceiving their spouse. It might not be for all readers, but it is so much better than the forced humiliation scenes in others.
Instead of we need to talk
they already had and were fine with it.
mikes66about 9 years agoEnjoyed the build up and the lack of degradation, humiliation and pain. A nice experience. Maybe next time Tom will have someone to share with Jim.
in4apennyin4apoundabout 6 years agoI think the story was very good, well written, with a good plot. I dream of this sort of thing happening to me.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoA very good story by a good writer.
Steve Orshonabout 5 years agoOverall good writing which is a plus of course as poor writing, even with a brilliant idea, will detract from the experience. A good story idea as well, exploring a slightly different track of the threesome invitation. I personally feel there could've been more buildup and that shower scene went way too far, but hey, that's me. Abrupt finish, but does leave the door open for chapter 2.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoWife Sex stories tagged "Camping" are always my favorite.
AJava469over 3 years agoWell written, good scenario, hardening in detail. Hope you return to writing.
Fresprtlvr8 months agoGreat story…something that takes place more often than not in the great outdoors…as I have experienced many times over the years…great memories !
romancer@romancer
