All Comments on 'Camping Trip at the Lake'

Why did she marry him in the first place? Being sweet doesn't amount to much.

This story has been told by so many others under so many different titles that it ought to be outlawed! Always hubby's old "friend". The "friend" always is bigger down "there" and lasts longer too boot! He was and still is the virile one of the group. Always taller, stronger, more charming or more of a bad boy, whichever you prefer. "Friend" and hubby's wife always gang up on hubby with subtle and some not so subtle put downs served with a side of humiliation. I wonder if something will happen that allows the hubby to spend a week with just his "friend" and his "friend's" wife Samantha. Maybe he can pay back his friend with a little Samantha action because we find out she thinks her husband is a prick who screws around on her. That, and she knows a secret about men with big packages. Biologically speaking they can't really use all of what they have, unless they want to create a reason for their partner to make an emergency care visit. Most women surveyed said 6-7" was long enough to be in "contact" with a man. This cuckold crap is so unrealistic. What man in his right mind (this seems to be the problem) would share his wife? No sane man! -- 1☆

First story!

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Makes no sense?

Could all writers PLEASE put the tags for your story at the top of your story since the admin, who could but won't put them at the top of page 1 instead of the end of the story so we don't waste our time reading something we don't want to or having to go to the last page to find out.

The latest of the cuck wannabe writers. Oder eater will love it, then again, he loves anything sick and disgusting. 1/5

Nothing but a bunch of cockroaches.

Love camping stories. She should get off of birth control & let Casey knock her up. Hope there’s more to this series. Thanks for the read!!!

Apparently all the writers are on vacation

The biggest problem with this story is that you wrote Brett as being small and not very good in bed. It would have been better if Brett was was at least reasonably skilled in bed, and could compete with Casey, rather than being mostly a dud. Why would Samantha have married Brett in the first place?

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One other issue: Casey is written as being physically much larger than Brett in every way -- biceps twice Brett's -- but really, how many best friends are there out there who are so completely physically mismatched? It's difficult for them to do anything together that isn't sedentary, and that is friendship-limiting.

My problem with sluts like her ; she moved Casey to the lead role hugging , kissing and fondling him and paying her husband little mind and all but forgetting he was even there . I stopped reading early in the story after they swam all day and she turned all her attention to Casey . She should have paid all her attention to her husband and Casey should have only been an extra dick to enjoy as a third wheel not a main course . Easy to see she’ll end up with him and the trio will be reduced to two , leaving her husband without a wife or best friend . Sad tale of greedy lust and self indulgence

After sharing your wife with a good friend who has a big cock things change between you and her in the bedroom. I loved when she told me her pussy now belongs to him first from now on.

Shame this story starts slow and marches in mud till it ends in a weak dick non ending.

This writer failed to adhere to the Cuckold Writers Association checklist. This was a little different, but it was still essentially the same tired old cuck story. The writing seemed jumbled, and it moved slowly and not always very clear. Much of the dialogue was circular or somewhat obtuse. Needs an editor. Badly. Two stars.

Welcome SV to the land of Loving Wives. At least you seem to realize LW is actually anything but a place for stories about wives who truly love their husbands. The next hurdle you need to cross is accepting there are no truly new plots, so you shouldn’t worry about those who bitch about seeing the same story/plot before; the best people like us can hope to do is manage to put our own little twist to it. Given the vast number of LW stories even that is almost impossible, so just write a story like you enjoy and the heck with the rest of us. The story is FREE, so it’s bound to be at least worth what it cost the reader.

You asked for constructive criticism—I think—so here goes. First the plus—you have a dang good writing style; I mean you tell your story in a way that keeps me reading, even though I was coming to hate Morgan more with each paragraph, Casey was becoming more of a despicable prick and Brett went from being a doormat to a bat-shit-crazy wimp. You really didn’t have one character the reader could identify with.

Like so many other writers on this site you went for the ‘Hubby wants to see Wifey’ fuck somebody else. Are you married? If so, would you want to watch your wife with another guy? The very thought of it pisses me off, even though I think I may have used it myself if I thought it would help the story.

To pass on advice given to me by one of the more successful writers on the site: ‘throw out the tape measure.’ The average cock size (the last time I checked with google) was still about six inches so hang up the foot long ‘sugar dogs’ and just stick with relative sizes. “He was big,” He was just a little bit bigger than Hubby, but maybe Hubby might have been a tad longer. (After all, you’re giving away the poor sucker’s pussy, at least give Hubby something to feel good about himself.)

One last word of advice—always finish the damn story. Nothing pisses me off more than reading a good story that has me hanging by my fingertips which ends with a promise of CH02 soon. I read one the other day that many years later it was still unfinished.

4/5 stars. cd

Nice exploration of newly granted permission to play. I might have preferred Brett not be quite so inadequate, and also cum in or on her rather than the dirt, but I appreciated that she had his permission and approval when she played. All in all, it felt like this was somewhere between a humiliation story where he's a loser and she finds fulfillment with a better guy and rubs his face in it, and an open sharing story where the couple is secure and loving and enjoy playing with others together. I'm more partial to the latter. But this was good, especially thinking of her as the focus of the story rather than Brett. It was about her exhilaration at finally getting to do what she'd been fantasizing about.

Part two please! 5 Stars.

I hate cuck stories.

No I didn't read this one.

But I'm right this one is a cuck story, no?

I hate cuck stories.

Great stroy, love to see where is goes.

Nothing more than a camping cuck story, one done so many times previously.

This is a poorly written cuck story that I ended up skimming b/c the author didn't have the decency to label it as such. If you don't want 1 star ratings, let people know at the start it is a cuck story and readers will move on w/o reading or ranking. Even as a cuck story, I read enough to know lead character Morgs was a selfish bitch. Unsympathetic leading characters that have not consequences makes for a poor story, cuck or not. So, there's two tips for you.

@JoeBetterBNice

This is a poorly written cuck story that I ended up skimming b/c the author didn't have the decency to label it as such. -

"Cuckold, cheating, and wife sharing" are listed in the tags. You must have skimmed those as well.

@ReedRichards,

Samantha and Casey are a couple and Brett, and Morgan are a couple.

I think that you nailed it! The story reminds me of a camping trip with my wife and best friend.

Reminds me of my last camping trip. I had met a gal at the county fair, she was visiting from Sacramento. One of my buddies was putting a camping trip together for a bunch of us at Western Electric almost all vets. So I called my new sweetie and drove up to get her in Sac and then to Yosemite. We got there late the first night and found it much colder than we used to. The next day, we found the rest of our group and had fun hiking the trails. Then back to our campground by the lake. The next morning I must have slept in. When I awoke, my gal told me that she had taken a bath in front of a bunch of boy scouts, telling me how their eyes got as big as saucers. LOL feeling jealous, I didn't appreciate her sneaking out of the tent like that. LOL If she hadn't given me VD that weekend we might have gotten more serious. LOL 5 stars, for great writing and great story.