All Comments on 'Camping with Daughter Ch. 04'

Poor dad , I know exactly how he feels . I wish my daughter had the same outlook as his , I would oblige her in a nanosecond . Keep them coming .

An incredible story. I do hope you intend to continue as it begs to be taken to a conclusion.

KEEP IT COMING. WHEN DOES THE MOVIE COME OUT?

cant wait for the next chapter this is a very addictive read never want it to end it just gets better keep them cuming.

this I keep think about the daughter with the jaws theme playing in my mind... I kept thinking on how she is getting closer to "eating" daddy.

Not.

You should never urinate into a stream or river, always a few yards away. The ground will filter any nasties out before they get into the water system. Also imagine getting your water for a morning coffee out of the stream and someone is upstream a few yards peeing right into you kettle.

Otherwise well written and a good read

A hot blowjob is a good start!! Five stars and a favorite point.

You have an amazing mind writing the way you do. Very erotic.

I thought for sure she was going to go in for a little lick just to see what it tasted like. It would be so awesome.