by Serca45
Great story, but I think Abbie should be more dominant. Conquer him with your strength and determination.
I don't see a bully.
Damn!!! That was good! Kept wondering what they would do to each other next. When i got to the end, I was surprised I already read both parts, and searching for the next chapters.
Seriously please continue, you really know how to write a good story.
Counter point - Love the fact that the big bad bully is unraveling into a girl in love over the course of this. It's both hot and wholesome.
Thats a good damn writing right here sir... You know your thing and all I have to say is - keep it up! I just want to see more. 😍
the thing that i dont like about futa, maybe even hate, is that typically they pictured more like... err... gigachads on steroids. And it feels pretty weird. I mean people get the "best of both world", but everytime stories ends on a dominance garbage.
Well, this time you managed to balance on verge of becaming one of this type of works. Well done.
Also that hangover stories... damn bro. You doing well
Surprisingly good, keep going...And dont make it only futa on male, let boy hit a few
You should definitely continue this !! It’s the fucking best I have read in quite a while. Just AMAZING !!
Man I come back here everyday to check . This is so AMAZING AND SEXY to read . Waiting so bad for the next part :)
Your stories are so good, this camping one and the gloryhole one are top notch. I love them so much and I come back every other week to see if you've posted more, though I understand writing masterpieces like these with as many chapters there are take time. Best wishes <3
Please continue! This story is so great! Will they get into frotting? Thats such an underused kink but so hot.
author, if you read this, could you comment an update on if there will be more or not? and if there is when we can expect to see it?
Please, please do finish this. This is the best written, most heartwarming, hot story I've read. Really want an ending. Truly, it's beautiful.
It's criminal that you haven't continued this story. The futa and groom story was great though, thank you!
I'm really enjoying this story line and can't decide who the MC should end up with. Or maybe, he needs to be with more than one of them. I know he likes Jane and she likes him.