by cellophanesmile
I had just read the firt chapter this morning and I was hoping there'd be a new one soon! You definitely made my weekend! Keep up the great work!
these two chapters were so sweet cute; and although somewhat unrealistic by the fast pace of the stories i loved them both great job!
I loved this series, I'm just waiting for the next chapter to see if they catch the rapist and what happens with Poppy, does she find a guy?
I liked it. You lost track of your characters for a couple of paragraphs: "Melanie sat down in the corner of her math class..." on through the next paragraph. That should be Bee, not Melanie. A few incorrect word choices (it's "throes" not "throws", "let his eyes wander" not "let his eyes wonder" - that last one was in part 1). It normally would have bothered me that he took her virginity when she was high on a date rape drug, but I can see how it was necessary for the plot. Overall, well done.
It's a nice story and nicely connected to the first part. Now, just waiting for the next chapter. Maybe the rapist finally gets caught?
they were so good. I loved both of the stories....i'd like to see another on poppy though and maybe the end of the rapist when thats over but other then that...brilliant !!!
What is with you and this idea that everyone meets there true love right after being raped?
I'd suggest working with a professional to try and get a handle on your rape fantasies...
Ok so maybe it's not the most realistic plot but it's still a good story. please finish, I want to know who the actual rapist is!