All Comments on 'Campus Visit Goes Bad'

This is well-written. The characters are interesting enough to keep going for another chapter or two.

I'm sure you can find many more chapters to write about. She probably wants to meet up with her ex. and tell him where to go .

Turn it to Anthony and her relationship! More chapters would be very good!

This was painful to read because I don't find rape to be the least bit erotic. That said, it was well written technically, the pace kept me reading, and the level of detail was just right to be immersive.

Though it doesn't offset the crime that was committed against Lydia, it was satisfying to see Richard get a tiny taste of being physically dominated by a stronger man. Perhaps he'll grow to like it in prison one day.

P.S. I loved Anthony's jokes! Nerdy hotness.

I was dreading Anthony being a bad guy, too. Glad he wasn't.

Nice story, but why does she go from Jenn to Lydia to Jenn?

You got all of Anthony's physics jokes from the robotic butler in Fallout 3. I know there's no real point in telling you this, I just want you to know that there's other nerds like you on this website. Good job on the story.