All Comments on 'Can I Borrow Your Boyfriend?'

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TeenTopTeenTopover 4 years ago
The real thing is missed out

Nice little story, but after the long introduction and stretching the boy's hole out, the description of the ass-fucking is far too short.

chesthairslavechesthairslaveover 4 years ago
WTF?

Interesting story but the ending was as successful & satisfying as premature ejaculation!

ShadowRosieShadowRosieabout 4 years ago
How interesting

Good-bye ex-girlfriend, you can go home forever now. Your boyfriend, I mean ex-boyfriend has a new occupation and really gets into it as long as the borrower gets into him. He's getting used very well now. So you don't need to be here any more. Bye.

knowsbetterknowsbetterabout 4 years agoAuthor
I agree, the ending isn't as good as it could have been

Yeah, the ending is pretty abrupt. I'll try to revise it or add a sequel. I'm thinking we'll either take him to the video arcade and make him service strangers, or bring him back to the girlfriend and teach her to be a better top... or both...

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