All Comments on 'Can I Give You a Hand? Ch. 05'

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Havoc100Havoc100about 2 months ago

The conclusion was a let down. I expected more than a description of how it turned out. An entire chapter could have been generated from the creation and opening of the clinic.

IDAREU4MEIDAREU4MEover 1 year ago

Fantastic story good job well written Thank you !

SkubabillSkubabillover 2 years ago

Excellent story. Pietro has quickly become a favorite. I think I've read all dis work and have yet to find something of his I didn't like.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved it!

MarkT63MarkT63almost 3 years ago

Excellent series!!!

RamazaRamazaover 4 years ago
Exelent first storie

I must say, that after reading your story, i can't wait to see what the next one be like, i hope that we see more from you soon

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Dutch immigrant to Australia at age 6. Arrived with no English language. Catholic schooling. University to study teaching. Teacher for 42 years. Retired. Married since 1979.

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