All Comments on 'Can I Give You a Lift?'

Great story. Loved the slow build up. I think it was the fact that Ava couldnt look at Dani was the give away. Hope that there is another instalment coming soon.

5 stars.

I look foward to ch 2 and seeing whatDani and Ava get up to.

Dani spelling her full name round Ava's clit was so 🔥. As was the "liked that" scene that went before it.

One question please why was Dani in physical therapy? Or did i miss it?

WP at your best .

Jane

...could we time-worn saps ask for than a sappy MILF love story with some first-time jitters? Another worthwhile effort, WP. I always enjoy your tales but I do particularly like those where you've stepped outside of your usual box---they appeal to the old romantic lurking behind this crusty exterior. More soon, please!

Thanks so much to all who have commented. This is why it's such a joy to share these tales with all of you.

I will tell you that there is a second part coming that will answer the question of why Dani is undergoing physical therapy. It is in the final stage of completion and will be in the queue soon.

And to Maonaigh, I offer this -- Sappy MILF romance is one of my usual boxes now. :-) It all started with Speedy Deliver and has snowballed from there. And I thank you for your continued encouragement as I explore this path.

Great story. You've just gotta write more.

Great start; very well written and looking forward to reading more. Wondering if one of the therapists might have have been encouraging Ava as well.

I do not know why you keep writing the other stories, you are very good at these stories, I love the way you build them up and I hope you keep going

Bambino :)

We loved this, it read so much better this time around. beautiful stuff so looking forward to the next chapter being published.

Hugs from both of us :-)

I really loved it. It was sexy and romantic.

Wonderful story. Can’t wait for the next part. Lovely, tender, romantic story. I like you writing this kind of story much more than your usual stuff. Many thanks.

Wonderful as always mate. You've got my email 😊

That was one of the best.. and so natural... I oozed out only by going through this story ( off course without touching my..k ).. very nice.and keep it up. 😚

Looking forward to part 2. I would like a little more character background on Dani. I liked the slow build of the story. Well done!

arousing story, thanks

Still thinking about the name spelling part. I hope that Ava will do the same to Dani the next time, even if she has slightly less letters to work with. ;) I think that sex should always involve this kind of patience and selflessness, no matter if you're a beginner or experienced. Loved how the trust and confidence was allowed to build up. Personally, I prefer to read about relations between "mature" women who have insecurities and imperfections, something that is rarely addressed with college characters. Looking forward to receiving a notification that Part 2 has been published in my news feed.

Veryyummy and very well done! Thank you!

Nothing to add at the moment. Except to say 'thank you'.

Hot well written. Enjoyed busting a nut reading it. Thanks

I love the way you built the story without haste and allowed the reader to be drawn in. Looking forward to the next chapter. Soon, I hope. Thank you.

A beautiful caring story, which shows how lovingly a relationship can develop when a person is patient and understanding of another's hesitations and fears. A hundred times better than a quick stroke story.

Robertodavo a.k.a. Robert Davidson.

Love the slow seduction.

Yes miss Wax, good But what age have they? Are you one of those girls who call middle aged to people of 40 ou 50 something?

But is good ok

To: Theserialwaffle... they can can be as old as you need them to be. To put it in perspective, Ava has two grown children. Dani is younger, but by how much, I don't know. She won't tell me.

Ah! Miss Wax nice answer. And you know this second time I read this story , listening to Busoni´s Chaconne after Bach´s Partitas by Edna Stern it was even better... the slow approach, the piano playing, the spelling of the letters, the slow tempo and it´s variations, the physical response, the increasing dificulty of the piece and your wonderful writing... And the music kept playing... Great writing of yours

thank you and stay safe

Merry Christmas

the real, and warm characters, the skilled use of humour, the pacing of the story, the description of the sex ... all combine to make this a wonderful piece of writing.

i cannot wait to read further instalments.

kudos, dear wax

Beautiful story. Thank you.

Lovely story. Really loved it.

excellent

Loved every second of reading this incredibly beautiful story.

Can’t wait to see where you take it