All Comments on 'Can I Sleep Here'

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germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uabout 8 years ago

The use of wrong names was confusing but the intensity of the sex scene was not. Whew! It had me squeezing my thighs together putting pressure on my clit. The word imagery was just that good

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved the story

Great story, not going to get hung up on the name issue

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Erica? Tamara?

If you can't be bothered to remember your characters' names, why the fuck should we?

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