All Comments on 'Cancun Candids Ch. 02'

well written, can't wait to read ch.3.

This story is super hot and i can't wait until he fucks his sisters ass!!! Just like I have done!

I had to re-read the first installment since I read it so long ago. The second installment definitely lived up to my expectations. Hopefully the next chapter won't be long in coming. Keep up the good work.

Totally have to keep going!

we neee more

Totally fucking hot!

Great buildup, please make sure you don't leave us waiting another insane amount of time before you finish! :)

I think that it could get a bit noisy when Jen and David get back to their room. I hope that mom and dad are not in the room next door. But then again, that could lead to some rather interesting story lines also.

Look forward to the next chapter soon. Very well written story!

man, this was amazing. i just had an amazing time. thx

Understand that life gets in the way - but what a buildup!

Please expedite part 3.

This guy took 2 1/2 years to write part 2. Don't hold your breath for part 3, your pleas fall on ears that don't care what you say.

Just hope it doesn't take as long to write the next chapter...it could really be exciting. Thanks.

I really enjoyed the dialogue which carried the story so well. The siblings pushed their limits with teasing and suggestive comments which changed the dynamics of the typical brother/sister relationship. I'm anxious to see how Dave manages to keep a copy of the pictures for himself and if their entanglement continues beyond mere picture taking. An easy 5 *****. RB

Man I was really getting into the story when she was sliding her finger inside of her anus with her brother helping her get "unstuck". I want to see how this ends please write another story soon!

This is perfect... I was really having fun n then you just left it hanging... Fast please

You are avoiding adding hardcore Incestuous sex, yet you are producing a very hot story! I like it. great lead up to what I can only guess will be a hard core conclusion.

Great job!

I must admit that I have really got engrossed with Jen and David. Please continue their tale. I would love to read what happens when they get back to the room and the rest of their vacation.

I am wanting the rest of this story so bad now. I have got to know if they the brother sister relationship steps up to a whole new level or not. Please write the next part to this love story.

Please hurry.

Thank you.

The sexiest part was that he (Dave) never had to expose himself to his sister. It wasn't needed to make this an amazing story.

Part II please.

Given its been over 6 years since this appeared, you're not going to finish it now, are you ?

Yet another great disappointment with an unfinished story...........

Rapier

Should have checked, it would have got 1 star not 5 if I had realised sooner it was abandoned.

Bloody shame as the build up has been great.

The author says to be concluded. 8 years on and still not finished. It's a good - ish story totally ruined because the final third is missing. It's like writing a story and not even bothering to write the last chapter. In fact that is exactly what has happened0

I agree

more please

But what happens back at the hotel room when Jen is in the shower cleaning up from the day and he sneaks in the bathroom?!

Really want more please. I’ll Venmo you commission!

This is fucking hot!