by buzltyr
what i would give to be in that father's place . don't take too long with the rest of this story . you could make this last a long time .loved it.
Very good start! Anxiously awaiting chapters 2-5, This story line has a lot of possibilities
Erotic and very well told - almost. A caring and understanding father is brought to climax by daughter and [female] friend. An experience that many fathers may need to endure; and this father survived.
Maybe in chapter 2, dad will not be so altruistic. In chapter two, please proofread a bit more carefully so that fewer typos appear – they detracted a bit [25%] from an otherwise top-notch tale.
Gran Pa
Nice slow build-up, good desciptions (more of the 'other' girl would have been nice as well)...just like a hollywood movie, scene is primed for a sequel. Bring it on - but read, read and re-read and catch some of the editing errors - would make for an even better story.
Where is the actual incest? Hell this could have been better placed in the Exhibitionist & Voyeur category. I was hoping for some flesh pounding between Dad, daughter and girlfriend. sheesh. Finish the story ok?
you've done well with this story and definitely looking forward to many more parts. Didn't have a daughter to fuck but I sure gave it to my sisters. Did both of them for a number of years, as well as other members of the family. Early on for some reason I felt that I was bi and my sisters, nieces, cousins, uncles and father were there to take care of my sexual needs, ranging from fucking/sucking the women to blowing and giving my ass to the men.
I always tried to do things at a time and location where I'd get caught. For example, I would make it a point to fuck my sister in the same bed where my mother was taking a nap so we'd get caught. She would tell me how wrong it was and I should stop it immediately. I answer to that was that I was going to fuck her and eat her pussy. The look on her face said it all - total shock. Yes, i did start mounting her and puting my cock in her cunt. I told her that the 2 sisters and her were now my whores to use as I saw fit.She began to cry so I turned her over, called in my two sisters to watch as I proceeded to fuck my mother in her ass. I did use them in lots of ways.