All Comments on 'Candice and Tony Movie Night'

by starfury69

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 4 years ago
So natural

Two people sitting next to each other responding to natural arousal. In this case they happen to be mother and son.

Absolutely beautiful love story that more mothers and sons should experience.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
My 2 cents

Short and sweet. There's no love like mom's love. Thanks for your time and imagination.

ekim22ekim22over 4 years ago
Actually anything but natural.....

Rushed. No awkwardness, no reluctance, no build up. Just jumped on each other likea new date would.

Wasn't for me but I appreciate that you contributed. I hope you'll write more and include more build up next time!

hrobbiehrobbieover 4 years ago

Present tense or past, please make up your mind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
very good

till the anal, yuk

linnearlinnearover 4 years ago
Enjoyable Read

Although it jumped right to the action I thought it was a good quick read. I agree that the anal was not necessary, it was his first time after all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Almost a great story

Jumping straight to the action was a bold move. I very much enjoyed the story until the anal. It ruined it for me. I must admit I skipped to the end and didn't read any more.

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