All Comments on 'Candy Shops'

I'm holding a five for next time. But I always pay my debts.

It was a cute story. Enjoyed reading it!

Very intriguing story! Not the type I usually enjoy, but this one caught my interest. Nice job!

I’m going to agree with the first comment. I’m going to hold on to that last star till I see where this goes. Fantastic concept. I’m going to try my hand at something like it

really enjoyed the story but klitomatic's comment takes the cake well done good sir

Good story but odd. Also Paul forcing himself on Virginia seemed to much like rape.

Not totally satisfying, so I almost gave you a 4.

5*

Tc

Sorry to steal someone else's comment but it was exactly what I was going to write. "Very intriguing story! Not the type I usually enjoy, but this one caught my interest." Great job, thank you for writing. Should win the Halloween contest!

Part 2 please and thanks.

5plus stars

Intriguing story that never dragged, but the ending was somewhat...

...less than satisfying. I think what bothers me more is that, as a writer myself, I can't think of a satisfactory way to suggest how to fix it, or even where to go for a "part 2" without the story line falling into a cliche. And, because of that, I have to give it a 5.

What a unique story. Gave you a 5. The nick names were great and the dialogue fantastic. Thanks for taking the time to write and share.

In stories with The Taboo Tags, I'm not a huge fan of "the drugs made me do it!" The emotions don't seem genuine when the characters are in an altered state of mind imo. But I think this story handled it well calling them "herbal treats". I enjoyed the Loved it 👍

Delicious!!

This hit the spot not gonna lie. Can't wait for a part 2!

Well done!!

I thought they’d be sucked dry, or that they’d wake up the next morning 35 years older. But I guess it would’ve made this a horror story :-D

Well done :)

I really enjoyed this! Interesting story and great storytelling. Great job!

I pay my debts, 5 stars and a desire for more like this! Ending, I think could have been longer. Still 5 stars.

How unbelievable and silly can you get.

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Creepy und Fun!

11/10 Anatomically Correct Candies!

I think I have read it before and enjoyed it. Question, Do they get the 35 years, too?