All Comments on 'Candy's Fashion House Ch. 19'

I want to say that this is one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. I hope that it won't be the last one that I get to read from you. Please don't let this be the only story you write.

I love the story, and I'm a little sad to see the apparent end, but I love the fact you left it wide open to continue if you ever decide to come back to it

Loved every bit of it. Well done! I also hope you continue to write!

Total agree with ending statements of forgiveness, open mind and a loving heart

This entire story was simply wonderful! Great storyline and characters. Hopefully you will write more.

I really enjoyed each chapter. I could hardly wait for the next one. I have to say that the ending really surprised me. Kelli is someone who should inspire all of to be better. Even through all of the most trying situations, she remained true to those she loves. I also hope to read more of your works in the future. Shawn

This was a great story. You did a very good job of presenting your characters and developing a story plot.

You are a writer! Thanks for sharing this story with us.

is lauren going to take siobhan away from kelli and have her for herself because she is greedy and has to have it all really didn't like her getting back would like more

I looked up and read your stories in "Loving Wives". You have written good stories. I hope to read new ones. Keep up the good writing.

I absolutely loved this story. Erotic and romantic throughout the entire series. Lauren reminds me of an ex girlfriend I had so I could really sympathize with Kelli and all the challenges she had to endure. But I’m glad it seems to have worked out for everyone at the end. I’m a little sad that the story has come to a conclusion, but I look forward to reading your next adventure! Well done darling 😁

Such a wonderful story of all the highs and lows of living with the women within yourself please write some more stories

it is letdown to know its over,, but still love every chapter. great writing.

You made me cry again In fact its really hard to see the keys right now. I loved it. LOVED IT! You are a beautiful person and an excellent writer. Whats more is you are an incredible friend whom I trust, admire, value and need more than you will ever know. You nailed it my friend. Thats one hell of a story you wrote and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing it. You know you havent heard the last of me and I'm confident I havent heard the last from you. That for me is the frosting on this cake.

Enjoyed it immensely, and hope that you have more stories to tell. Thank you.

I read this story from beginning to end and keep waiting for a "big bang" conclusion. While I did enjoy the story it ended with a whimper. I don't feel that Michael / Keli ever came to grips with their sexuality. Keli was confused about her sexuality through out the entire story - a horny male who loved to have sex with women as a male would do, but loved to dress, act and feel like a woman. At the same time Keli was afraid to have to experience penetrative sex that a woman experiences. He never did sort out his sexual orientation.

I was truly surprised at this ending! I felt early on Lauren was a wicked woman wanting her way all the time! Maddy and Alecia jetted off to London and were out of the picture but the clincher was Siobhan becoming pregnant with Keli's baby! All the players had a place to lay their heads at night including Lauren! We all hope the friendship lasts forever!

I loved each chapter and am interested in how it will develop with a child in the family and two beautiful women and a transgender. Will Kellii make love to boyh Lauren and Siobhan after they got a child, or will Lauren move out. I would like to see another chapter as well

The story kept me very interested, however, you might look into the use of COMMA, unless you Brits have a different definition.

This isn't going to end well! We need to know what happens.

You did a good job ending the story. The thought that all is well and ends well. I hope the Lauren has truly changed and that this new relationship works for all. When I reread the story I began to consider Siobhan lesbianism. It made sense that if Lauren was going to be a part of Kelli's and Siobhan's life that a lesbian relationship between Lauren and Siobhan. This seems workable as long Lauren respects the relationship and let Kelli live her life on Kelli's terms of living in a relationship that respects Siobhan and Kelli's boundaries.

I really enjoyed this story.

It seems you took us on a journey that went full circle. Michael/Kelli was in a relationship with two women (Lauren and Alecia) and now he is in a relationship with Siobhan and Lauren. Siobhan is a lesbian and when I reread the story the thought crossed my mind that Siobhan needed some lesbian loving since she felt uncomfortable with certain aspects of love making with Kelli.

I hope that Lauren has changed and will respect the boundaries set by Kelli and Siobhan.

Cagivagurl, you did a wonderful job with this story. Thank you.

The whole story took me. The forth and back, the emotions and all was pretty much describing real live somehow. I started to believe you will end it as drama rather than happy end, how so often in reality.

Thanks for the statement at the end. Forgiveness is no weakness!

read the whole lot and enjoyed every moment...xxx

I couldn’t put down the story once I started

This is a great hard to put down read. Thanks for putting it up here. I also think after doing a careful spell check of the story. You should put in on Amazon's kindle. It is a story people would buy.

SJ

Started reading your story a few days ago, literally couldn't put it down, definitely the best story I have read here by far, truly novel worthy.

Is anybody really THAT stupid? Simply awful writing.

A realy wonderfull story. And I´m glad that Kellie didn`t ended up sucking cocks. That would have been a major turn down. I read all the parts within a day. Thank you so much.

Thank you for writing this story...It was truly a fun journey.

Loved this series , I really cared for the characters, My favourite so far 5*

I was so interested in the story and what would happen...so little sex (though it was exciting) and what jerks Lauren and Micheal/Kelli were. Great story. Get an editor! You rock! You can write!

S

Loved it spent all day reading it.

Thank you

Both this and Marion's story.

Aaaahhh! Fantasy. The women characters are all sexually adventurous types. There were no bad characters, just people doing stupid or wrong things. (Never have liked anything totally black and white....well except vanilla & hot fudge). And maybe I realized I should chuck my stained college T shirt to be a bit more presentable for others. Cross dressing though?... Anyone ever try putting lipstick on a pig? I applaud those of you who can pull it off though. I learned a thing or two from some of your sex scenes. After researching the internet, I find your descriptions of pleasuring women to be actually 100% factual. I am both thrilled to try out such "knowledge" on my wife, while also mad as hell it took me all these years to find out. Such is life.

After checking your profile, I still can't make up my mind whether the you're male or female. Regardless, a salute to a beautiful mind whatever body it resides in. .

Great story. I usually won't read a story that is this long, but I couldn't stop reading. It was so emotional with plenty of sex scenes to keep it hot and steamy!! Loved it!

I enjoyed reading ever bit of your work. Thank you for sharing. I loved the emotiins you expressed. I loved and hated every character. Sometimes at the same time. Thank you

I read all 19 chapters. It was like a car crash, in this case, you keep reading, in hopes it will get better, your last chapter was by far your best (still a lot of spelling and editing issues). I read Marion and Mi, first and now I understand where the word “babe” came from. You have talent as a storyteller, but I believe you need to improve as a writer to improve as a storyteller.

I can't believe I read the whole thing. I got hooked with the characters as the story came to life and grew to a great climax. I saw a reality with the characters that I seldom see on this site. Please keep writing these wonderful stories. Each chapter was given 5 Stars. I love this author!!!!!

Loved this storey, don’t normally read this genre, however liked your other stories so thought I would give it a go, hated it in places but, loved the way you built the characters, you are a fabulous writer, keep up the good work.

Waikiekie Boy.

Caught in a crossfire I think he simply disappears and they never hear from HIM again.

its a great story but Lauren is certifiable :)

Again I think this was an amazing story and journey. I was constantly captivated throughout the story and how it flowed. Tears were certainly said absolutely loved every moment and amazing to read.❤️

In my years of reading erotica, I've seen several despicable and disgusting characters but Laura is the worst of all of them. I really hope that there's no one like her in real life. She has a ridiculous number of psychological issues.

She is an emotional manipulator, a physical and emotional abuser, has commitment issues, is a serial cheater, short tempered, extremely callous, a narcissist, has no regard for the safety of others, obsessive and the worst of all, she uses her partners' insecurities to get what she wants. She used Michael's insecurity with his masculinity to destroy the real Michael and replace him with someone she wanted. She went behind his back and gave him hormones, which is worst thing anyone could do. She used Alecia's love for her to manipulate her into being in a polyamorous relationship. She used Siobhan's guilt to bend her for her needs. She might not have done any of this intentionally, but the fact that she did them makes her one vey bad. Therapy will not be enough for her, she needs to be admitted to a psychiatric facility.

I wrote this comment because I see a lot of comments idolizing Lauren's relationships. She is the most toxic kind of person possible. Cagivagurl is great writer and the story is well written. But I don't want anyone thinking it's a good relationship.

More great storytelling.

To those complaining about Lauren being more-or-less crazy, crazy people Can be hella attractive because of their intensity and passion. Some times it's like they have a fire burning within them, fueling their creativity, their passion, their devotion; but also burning and scaring people and things around them.

Well another great story. I can’t think of anything I would add. You write great stories. You should think about making one of them a movie script. The characters are so well done and I love them.

A wonderful tale! 5*

Not my cup of tea,but even for those who like this stuff 19 chapters is over kill.

I have to say I have wanted to put this down a number of times frustrated at the unbelievable manipulations of some of the characters. That you wrote so well that many have responded to the story is a testament. However you set up not a few arcs that really should be finished. You brushed over the whole coming out storyline you have been using to tie this whole series together and of course what happens now, happily ever after, does Lauren have a baby too later? Is there a marriage if so who? I would hope you someday take this back up and resolve those.

This is my 2nd time reading this and can say without hesitation I’ve loved it even more the 2nd time round💞❤️

I know this is 3 years old so commenting may be pointless. I give the story 6.5 out of 10. I enjoyed it. There were some really great bits but so many loose ends leaving more questions than answers. It’s like it finished a chapter too soon.

It is an interesting look into an unusual world of Trans individuals and even though it is fictional, I have little doubt that many of these types of situations occur. My main problems with this story is two fold.

1) Could people who are writing stories or spell checking or even editing these wonderful pieces of work manage to figure out the difference between Prostate which is what all these stories tend to focus on which is usually described as a gland about the size of a walnut and located at the front of the males rectum which when lightly stroked or pressed, can cause intense sexual pleasure while also causing seminal fluid to be shot out of the penis or sometimes just a constant dribble and the word ProstRate (notice the second R) which is a form of laying oneself facedown on the ground to show reverence or submission. Why so many people somehow mistake one word for the other while writing these stories is beyond me and also takes me immediately out of the story.

2) How this person could continually go back to their house and do the grocery shopping and then cook up the involved parties a nice dinner after the abuse Kelli has endured. These were not things like “oops, I spilled ink on your shirt” but infidelity and feeding Kelli birth control pills. I just don’t understand how so many people can keep telling him to relax and he is a drama queen when he has been abused, lied to, drugged and attempted rape it’s a sex toy! Yes, that is a thing.

I still found the story a fun read with many kinks within.

Ending seemed rushed. Could have used a few paragraphs to clarify the closing bedroom scene. Did Lauren teach Siobahn what do with a penis?

Wonderful story!

Wonderful story

Keep writing you have a great writing and a very good story teller

Carolynne

Never intended to read it all. Sometimes upset by the stupidity of Lauren and Kelli’s tolerance, but I will never forget the story. Well done.

I loved this story. At times I despised all of the characters but it intrigued me to keep reading

Thank you

Sissy janet

I have just read the entire series end to end in one sitting.

It took me through so many emotions, envy, disgust, compassion, despair and horny!

I am a crossdresser myself and I easily found myself seeing Michael/ Kelli as myself.

I so wanted Kelli to get off with a guy along the way and found his obstinacy annoying and the bisexuality of the female characters.

I, too, found the ending rather rushed but hey, it had to end somewhere.

I gave it 5 stars. I really did enjoy it.

What a great story. Easily as good as Dallas or Dynasty. Well done!

I hated Lauren, but I do feel bad for her and I am happy they are all together now. Great series even if the road was very bumpy.

IMHO your much more of a writer than you give yourself credit

I love your stories. This is the second series I've ended up reading from start to finish in one go.

I have to say, Lauren was straight up an abuser, and it often frustrated me when Kelli's friends downplayed the seriousness of the abuse (mostly cause it's such a tragically realistic portrayal).

I loved that Kelli got to the point where she loved herself enough to reject the mistreatment, especially given that she held her ground even after she'd forgiven Lauren.

Thank you so much! I loved the story and was sad to see it end...I must see what else you have written because this was really fantastic..Thanks again for a touching heartwarming and erotic story.

I loved every minute of the read.

If by inner turmoil you mean an evil vindictive woman that takes a straight man and through coercion basically forces him to become a girl and then you just put it the end that he loves it. In my opinion, it's really messed up

And three months later Lauren tried to persuade Keli to let Brent stick his cock up her bum because that's what Lauren wants and no-one ever actually says 'No'.

Not really sure what the author was trying to do here but what they managed was to do was tell a story of grooming and emotional abuse. Perhaps the most chilling tale of domestic violence that I've ever read.

All I can say it kept me reading. I did love the story as it kept me wanting to know what was coming next for Keli. I did like the characters. I will keep reading all of your other stories and different categories!!!! Keep it up.!!

The most depressing story I have read in the past 20 years. The only thing Lauren got out of her life was it is ok to be a spoiled brat and if you whine enough everyone will do what you want.

I didn’t like this story at first. He really was a pathetic wimp. But I stuck with it out of curiosity and when I it was done I liked it. It was too long and the cast of characters was like a phone book and I had trouble keeping up with who was with who but in the end mostly everyone was happy

After reading the majority of Cagivagurls posted stories, I have come to the conclusion that she loves her characters far to much. She is so eager for them all to have a happy ending, that she has to force situations that don't really make sense.

Lauren should have never made it to chapter 19. Kelli/ Micheal's relationship should have ended when she moved in with Alicia for months. Not to mention the constant humiliation and put downs. Not to mention the drugging her husband, she was not a good person.

Kelli/ Micheal shifted half way through the story. Kelli at first seemed to be something like a drag persona. With Micheal wanting to stay masculine and occasionally be Kelli. But then he was forced to always be Kelli while constantly being belittled as Micheal. The reason they were comfortable as Kelli was because everyone close to him repeatedly told him that Micheal was awful and he should be ashamed of presenting as a man. It was a malicious effort to create Kelli and suppress Micheal.

Candy was the least empathetic transwoman. I was uncomfortable with the way she treated Micheal.

Siobhan is the only really sympathetic character. She had feelings for Kelli but was respectful of her relationship with Lauren. Honestly the whole Kelli, Lauren and Alicia relationship should have been cut out and the first divorce should have gone through. Then you have Kelli/ Micheal and Siobhan trying to start and navigate a relationship while building the company. All the while he has to deal with their ex wife and her lover on the board of her new company. Instead it was repeating the same toxic relationship over and over again.

And then you end with Kelli and Siobhan bringing Lauren into their relationship, and expecting different results. I understand you wanted to express forgiveness. But the scorpion always stings the frog. Lauren did absolutely no work to earn any kind of forgiveness. She was just sad. Being sad doesn't give her carte blanch to do what she did.

As the author you just gave it to her to secure your happy ending. Your plots are creative and thought out, but as I have stated your characters are inconsistent while also repetitive. I didn’t mean to critique so much, but I see a lot of potential in your work.

Are there really people as fucked up as all of the characters in this story? I admit to having read chapters 1 & 2, and the last page of this whatever it was. Never realized how homophobic I be. No Bud Light for me.

You know how at the end of a horror movie, the protagonist is driving away having finally escaped, but then all of a sudden the villain appears in the backseat causing the car to crash? That was this ending because there is no escape from Lauren.

Kelli should have kicked Lauren to the curb a very long time ago.

You guys are all morons I can't believe I wasted all day waiting for something to happen in this stupid ass story, what a fkin moron