All Comments on 'Can't Fight Time Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Oh yes! Death...:-D

This is great! Looking forward for more... will he guide her to her death? Oh what a delicious way to die. Lol!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Confused!

Is this the same chapters we already read earlier on?

From which chapter can I read something new? Wasn´t there also another title to this as I do not recognize this one as an older.

And if this is all the same - why does it take You so long to post all together?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Perfectionist?

I didn't read these the first time, but they still need some work if you rewrote them to be perfect? Editing errors, punctuation errors and sentence configs that still need help. Perhaps you should do a third rewrite?

superfeluously_esuperfeluously_ealmost 10 years ago
Love the story.

Funny people feel the need to make dickish remarks to stories they get to read for free....smh

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing!!!

I give this 5 stars. I think you are a talented writer.

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