by sensanin
This is great! Looking forward for more... will he guide her to her death? Oh what a delicious way to die. Lol!
Is this the same chapters we already read earlier on?
From which chapter can I read something new? Wasn´t there also another title to this as I do not recognize this one as an older.
And if this is all the same - why does it take You so long to post all together?
I didn't read these the first time, but they still need some work if you rewrote them to be perfect? Editing errors, punctuation errors and sentence configs that still need help. Perhaps you should do a third rewrite?
Funny people feel the need to make dickish remarks to stories they get to read for free....smh